Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity. For example, instead of 'Just when I was a child' say 'When I was a child'. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'advertisements for different types of toys into all houses' and use simpler, more natural expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: When I was a child, I saw many advertisements for toys on TV. They made a strong impression on me because they were very captivating, with bright colours and fun music. As a result, I always wanted to buy those toys after watching the ads.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases, such as 'in buses on trains' and 'advertising and public on public transport'. Try to be more precise and avoid repeating words. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I often see many advertisements on public transport, especially on buses and trains in my city. For example, about a year ago, I saw a TV ad for an electric bus service that operates 24/7. Overall, advertisements on public transport are common and usually promote local services.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and includes a good example, but try to improve sentence flow and avoid awkward phrases like 'fascinated me a lot'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and make your answer more natural.

Example: I don't like advertisements much, but sometimes they are informative. For example, I recently bought earbuds after seeing an Instagram ad that showed how useful they are during exercise. Because the ad was relevant to me, I did some research and decided to buy them.

Suggestion: Your answer is detailed and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy such as 'modern era of digital world'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and check for small grammar errors like missing articles.

Example: I usually like advertisements related to makeup, cosmetics, and clothing because I find these products fascinating, especially when they highlight the quality of fabric or introduce new items. Additionally, I enjoy ads for electronic products since we live in a digital world, and these ads help me stay connected and updated with the latest technology.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid small grammar mistakes like 'everyone else do' (should be 'everyone else does'). Also, use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Example: Most of the time, I scroll past advertisements on my phone or computer like everyone else. However, when the ads are relevant to my interests and contain useful or engaging information, I usually watch them until the end. I enjoy learning about new products or services that might be helpful to me.

× I saw many advertisements for different types of toys into all houses.

✓ I saw many advertisements for different types of toys in all houses.

The preposition 'into' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate location inside houses is 'in'. 'Into' implies movement toward the inside, which is not the intended meaning.

× I do see quite a lot of advertisements on public transport, especially in buses on trains in my city.

✓ I do see quite a lot of advertisements on public transport, especially on buses and trains in my city.

The prepositions 'in' and 'on' are incorrectly mixed. The correct preposition for vehicles like buses and trains is 'on'. Also, 'on buses and trains' is the correct phrase to indicate advertisements displayed on these vehicles.

× However, I haven't haven't noticed many.

✓ However, I haven't noticed many.

The phrase contains a repeated word 'haven't', which is a typographical error causing sentence structure issues. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× Overall, advertising and public on public transport is quite common and often promotes local services.

✓ Overall, advertising on public transport is quite common and often promotes local services.

The phrase 'advertising and public on public transport' is incorrect. The word 'public' is unnecessary here and causes confusion. The correct phrase is 'advertising on public transport'.

× Most of the time, I scroll advertisements on my phone or computer just like everyone else do.

✓ Most of the time, I scroll through advertisements on my phone or computer just like everyone else does.

The verb 'do' does not agree with the singular subject 'everyone else'. It should be 'does'. Also, the verb 'scroll' is usually followed by the preposition 'through' when referring to browsing content.