Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: ควรตอบคำถามให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ ใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'umm' และ 'like' นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อทำให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและมีความหมายชัดเจน

Example: Yes, one advertisement that impressed me as a child was a detergent commercial. It showed that people should spend their time doing what they love, even if their clothes get dirty, because they deserve to enjoy life.

Suggestion: ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ หลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'umm' และควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ชัดเจนและลื่นไหล

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on public transportation such as the BTS sky train, buses, and taxis. These ads are common because companies pay to display their products in these places.

Suggestion: ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจน รวมถึงให้เหตุผลหรือความคิดเห็นที่สนับสนุนคำตอบ พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของคำตอบ

Example: I don't really like advertisements because they interrupt my favorite shows. I prefer watching programs without any breaks for ads.

Suggestion: ควรตอบคำถามให้ครบถ้วนและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับเหตุผลที่ชอบโฆษณานั้น

Example: I don't usually prefer advertisements, but if I had to choose, I like makeup ads because they relate to my daily life. They help me find the best products by showing detailed information.

× Uh, yes, I think is the detergent advertisement.

✓ Uh, yes, I think it is the detergent advertisement.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before the verb 'is'. In English, sentences require a subject; here, 'it' refers to the advertisement. Without the subject, the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.

× So they're trying to say like, umm shouldn't should be umm, spending their time, umm, whatever they want, even they're gonna make The Dirty clothes, but they deserve it.

✓ So they're trying to say that people shouldn't be spending their time, umm, however they want, even if they make dirty clothes, but they deserve it.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. 'They' is ambiguous, and 'shouldn't should be' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the subject as 'people' and corrects modal verb usage and sentence structure for clarity.

× Yes, I see it all the time, especially on the public transportation, whether it's a umm, BTS, sky train, on a bus or even on the taxi.

✓ Yes, I see it all the time, especially on public transportation, whether it's the BTS sky train, a bus, or even a taxi.

The phrase 'on the public transportation' is incorrect; 'public transportation' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, 'on a bus' and 'on the taxi' should be consistent; 'in a taxi' is more natural. The correction removes unnecessary articles and adjusts prepositions for natural English usage.

× So I think umm, some of them got because some of them got paid to do that.

✓ So I think some of them do it because they get paid to do that.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Some of them got' is incorrect; it should be 'some of them do it' to indicate the action. Also, 'got paid' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'get paid' is appropriate.

× I don't think people like advertisement because why they have to choose advertisement instead of watching their favorite show for long period without interruption.

✓ I don't think people like advertisements because why would they choose advertisements instead of watching their favorite shows for a long period without interruption.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'people' and the general sense. Also, 'favorite show' should be plural 'favorite shows' to be consistent. 'Long period' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Well, I don't prefer any but if I have to pick one I would say I like the makeup advertisement because it's related to my daily life.

✓ Well, I don't prefer any, but if I have to pick one, I would say I like makeup advertisements because they're related to my daily life.

'Makeup advertisement' should be plural 'makeup advertisements' to refer generally. Also, commas are added for clarity. 'It's' changed to 'they're' to agree with plural 'advertisements'.

× So advertisement is one way that showcase the detail of the products and also.

✓ So advertisement is one way that showcases the details of the products as well.

The verb 'showcase' should be 'showcases' to agree with singular 'one way'. 'Detail' should be plural 'details' to match 'products'. The conjunction 'and also' is incomplete; 'as well' is more appropriate to finish the sentence.