Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng thiếu sự cụ thể và chi tiết để làm câu trả lời thêm sinh động và thuyết phục. Bạn nên thêm ví dụ cụ thể về một quảng cáo hoặc cảm xúc của bạn khi nhìn thấy quảng cáo đó để câu trả lời hấp dẫn hơn.

Example: I remember a colorful Coca-Cola billboard that caught my attention because of its bright colors and cheerful images. It made me feel happy and excited every time I saw it during trips to the city with my parents.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời hơi ngắn và có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách mô tả thêm về loại quảng cáo hoặc cảm nhận của bạn về quảng cáo trên phương tiện giao thông.

Example: Yes, in Vietnam, buses are often covered with colorful advertisements promoting various products like mobile phones and food. These ads are very eye-catching and make the bus rides more interesting.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do bạn thích quảng cáo, đồng thời sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn.

Example: Yes, I like advertisements because they are creative and can influence people's choices. I am interested in learning more about advertising as a major because it combines creativity and marketing.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn quá ngắn và không cung cấp thông tin cụ thể. Bạn nên cố gắng đưa ra ý kiến hoặc dự đoán về loại quảng cáo bạn có thể thích, để câu trả lời thêm phần phong phú và thể hiện khả năng suy nghĩ.

Example: Honestly, I am not sure yet, but I think I might like advertisements that use humor or storytelling because they are more engaging and memorable.

× However, I do recall being surprised by the many colorful billboards and poster I saw when my parents took me to the city.

✓ However, I do recall being surprised by the many colorful billboards and posters I saw when my parents took me to the city.

The word 'poster' should be plural 'posters' to agree with 'many' and 'billboards' which is plural. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1). When referring to multiple items, the noun must be in plural form.

× Yes, of course, in my country in Vietnam there are plenty of advertisement which were put on the buses, one of the popular public transportation in Vietnam.

✓ Yes, of course, in my country Vietnam there are plenty of advertisements which are put on the buses, one of the popular public transportation methods in Vietnam.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because 'plenty of' refers to multiple items. Also, 'which were put' should be 'which are put' to match the present tense context. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1) and present tense issue (ID 6).

× Yes, I really love any stuff relating to advertisement and I wish that I could learn the major in advertisement if I had a chance.

✓ Yes, I really love any stuff relating to advertisements and I wish that I could major in advertising if I had a chance.

The word 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to refer generally. Also, 'learn the major in advertisement' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'major in advertising'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1) and sentence structure issue (ID 26).

× Honestly, I still don't know what type of advertisement that I am interested in about.

✓ Honestly, I still don't know what type of advertisement I am interested in.

The phrase 'interested in about' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'interested in'. Also, 'that' is unnecessary here. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).