Talents— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, không quá dài dòng.

Example: I am good at sports, especially football. I have strong physical skills and good mental focus, which help me persist during training and matches.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về thời gian và hoạt động liên quan đến tài năng của bạn.

Example: I didn't fully master football, but I was better at it when I was young because I practiced regularly with my dad and friends. Nowadays, I am busier and have less time to play.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng bị rối. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ ràng tại sao tài năng của bạn có thể hoặc không thể hữu ích cho công việc tương lai, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu văn mạch lạc.

Example: I believe my talent in sports can be useful in my future job as a teacher because it helps me develop discipline and teamwork skills, which are important in education.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng bị lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về người thân và tài năng của họ.

Example: Yes, my father has the same talent. He goes to the football club every day and has excellent skills. I often learn a lot from him.

× I think are good at sports, specifically uh football, and because I think I have a good, good mental skill and also physic physics skill and I persist in uh work for a long time and I think I have a.

✓ I think I am good at sports, specifically football, because I think I have good mental skills and also physical skills, and I persist in working for a long time.

The sentence misses the subject 'I' before 'are', which is a singular and plural issue. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' because it refers to multiple abilities. 'Physic physics' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'physical'. 'Persist in uh work' should be 'persist in working' to use the correct verb form after 'persist in'. The sentence is also incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× I don't really master on it but when I was young I think I is better than now because when I was young I and my dad went out and practicing and many teamwork with my friends and but now I saw occupied with 30.

✓ I don't really master it, but when I was young, I think I was better than now because when I was young, my dad and I went out practicing and did a lot of teamwork with my friends, but now I am occupied with other things.

'I is better' is incorrect; it should be 'I was better' to match past tense and subject-verb agreement. 'Master on it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'master it'. 'Went out and practicing' should be 'went out practicing' or 'went out and practiced' to maintain tense consistency. 'Many teamwork' is incorrect; 'teamwork' is uncountable, so 'a lot of teamwork' or 'many team activities' is better. 'I saw occupied with 30' is unclear and likely incorrect; corrected to 'I am occupied with other things' for clarity.

× Everything my talent can be useful for my future work because my future work in my dream job is that teacher. And maybe it's not a suitable for the future work because even fujical is promotes and it is especially is study and knowledge and it is not.

✓ I think my talent can be useful for my future work because my dream job is to be a teacher. Maybe it's not suitable for future work because even physical skills are less promoted, and it especially requires study and knowledge, which I may lack.

'Everything my talent can be useful for my future work' is awkward; 'I think my talent can be useful for my future work' is clearer. 'My future work in my dream job is that teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'my dream job is to be a teacher'. 'It's not a suitable' should be 'it's not suitable' without 'a'. 'Even fujical is promotes' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation of 'physical skills are promoted'; corrected accordingly. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification.

× Uh, I think yes, because I was a inherit the strong help from my dad and my back is very strong as she, He's usually go to the football club every, every single days. And I think he's, uh, he has good skill and maybe I can study from him a lot.

✓ Uh, I think yes, because I inherited strong support from my dad, and my back is very strong like his. He usually goes to the football club every single day. I think he has good skills, and maybe I can learn a lot from him.

'I was a inherit' is incorrect; it should be 'I inherited'. 'My back is very strong as she' is incorrect; 'she' should be 'his' to refer to the dad. 'He's usually go' should be 'He usually goes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Every, every single days' should be 'every single day' as 'every' implies singular. 'He has good skill' should be 'he has good skills' to indicate plural. 'Study from him' is better expressed as 'learn from him'.