Art— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrasing (e.g., “I usually scored high on my drawings”) and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy drawing. It’s a hobby I’ve practiced for years, and it helps me relax after a busy day; for example, sketching landscapes calms me and improves my focus.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and make the response clearer: use a topic sentence, fix pronoun errors, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Mention frequency clearly and contrast preferences with a linking phrase.

Example: Yes, I do. My friends and I usually visit a gallery twice a month because we enjoy seeing new exhibitions; however, one of my friends prefers historical museums, so we alternate sometimes.

Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and smoother phrasing: give a clear intent and one specific reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrases like “extra classes for arts” with “extra art classes” or a specific course.

Example: Yes, I would like to take extra art classes, especially painting courses, because art lifts my mood and helps me relieve work-related stress.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and completeness: provide a clear past statement, a reason, and a completed result or feeling. Fix phrasing like “complementary subject” (use “a compulsory subject” or “an optional subject”) and finish the final thought.

Example: Yes, I attended art classes in primary school because it was a compulsory subject; as a result, I developed basic drawing skills and discovered that I enjoy creating pictures.

× Yes, my me and my friends usually visit a gallery twice a month.

✓ Yes, my friends and I usually visit a gallery twice a month.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and an extra possessive 'my' before 'me', and uses the wrong pronoun form. Use 'I' as the subject and place it after other people (polite order): 'my friends and I'. Also remove the stray 'my'.

× I prefer art galleries but my friend live historical museum.

✓ I prefer art galleries, but my friend prefers historical museums.

There are multiple issues: subject-verb agreement (friend -> prefers) and noun number (museum -> museums) and missing article/word order. Also 'historical museum' needs plural to match general preference. Added comma before 'but' for clarity.

× Yes, I want to learn extra classes for arts.

✓ Yes, I want to take extra art classes.

The verb 'learn' collocated with 'classes' is unnatural here; English uses 'take' for attending classes. Also use 'art' as a noun modifier (not 'arts') and plural 'classes'.

× I think arts can lift my mood and help me relieve from work related stress.

✓ I think art can lift my mood and help me relieve work-related stress.

Use singular 'art' as a general uncountable concept. The verb 'relieve' does not take 'from' in this context; say 'relieve stress' or 'relieve me of stress'. Also 'work-related' needs a hyphen when used as a compound modifier before 'stress'.

× Yes, I had to attend art classes in my primary school because it was complementary subject and I think it was a great subject because I can.

✓ Yes, I had to attend art classes in my primary school because it was a compulsory subject, and I think it was a great subject because I could.

Multiple problems: 'complementary' is incorrect word choice; 'compulsory' fits meaning. The sentence mixes past and present: use past modal 'could' to match 'had to' and 'was'. Also add a comma and 'and' for clarity. The final clause 'because I can' should be past 'could' or rephrased: 'because I enjoyed it' depending on intended meaning.

× I feel relaxed and relieved after drawing.

✓ I feel relaxed and relieved after drawing.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Relaxed and relieved' are parallel adjectives describing the subject's state after drawing. No change needed.

× Yes, I think I'm quite good at art because I usually scored high on my drawings.

✓ Yes, I think I'm quite good at art because I usually score high on my drawings.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I'm' and adverb 'usually' with past tense 'scored'. Use simple present 'score' to describe regular occurrences. If referring to past instances, 'I usually scored' could be acceptable, but here present fits the meaning.