Art— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and precise. The phrase "draw people's faith" is unclear and might confuse the listener. Try to use more common expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Example: Yes, I enjoy drawing, especially portraits of people. However, I'm not very skilled at drawing landscapes. I wish I had more talent to become a professional artist one day.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct prepositions and articles, and make your sentences more fluent. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I do. When I lived in Japan, I sometimes visited art galleries in nearby prefectures, and I found them amazing.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and lacks coherence. Try to express your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid contradictory statements without explanation.

Example: I love drawing, and I would like to learn more about art. If I focus more on it, drawing could become a serious hobby for me.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and articles, and try to make your sentences more natural and concise.

Example: No, I didn't take formal lessons. I used to draw by myself and really enjoyed sketching people's portraits and pets.

× Especially I like to draw people's faith, but I'm not good at drawing the sceneries.

✓ Especially, I like to draw people's faces, but I'm not good at drawing sceneries.

The word 'faith' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'faces' when referring to drawing people. Also, 'the sceneries' is incorrect because 'scenery' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'the' or plural form here. The sentence also benefits from a comma after 'Especially' for clarity.

× When I used to live in Japan sometimes I went to the museum art gallery which is located in close prefecture.

✓ When I used to live in Japan, sometimes I went to the art museum gallery which is located in a nearby prefecture.

The phrase 'located in close prefecture' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in a nearby prefecture' to indicate proximity. Also, 'museum art gallery' is better phrased as 'art museum gallery'. A comma after 'Japan' improves readability.

× It was the amazing.

✓ It was amazing.

The phrase 'the amazing' is incorrect because 'amazing' is an adjective and does not require the definite article 'the' here. The correct form is simply 'It was amazing.'

× Maybe if I concentrated it will be my hobby as well.

✓ Maybe if I concentrate, it will be my hobby as well.

The verb 'concentrated' is incorrectly used in past tense; it should be present tense 'concentrate' to match the conditional structure. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for clarity.

× I was drawing by myself, but I was enjoying a lot drawing people's portrait and also drawing the the pet.

✓ I drew by myself, but I enjoyed drawing people's portraits and also drawing the pet.

The past continuous tense 'was drawing' and 'was enjoying' are not appropriate here; simple past tense 'drew' and 'enjoyed' better express completed past actions. Also, 'people's portrait' should be plural 'portraits' to match the plural possessive, and the repeated 'the' is a typo.