Teacher— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "Umm" và nên kết thúc câu một cách hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Example: Yes, I have a favourite teacher. She was my first grade English teacher. At first, I didn't like English, but she made the lessons very interesting, so I started to enjoy the subject.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời trở nên chính xác và dễ hiểu hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng nói rõ ý hơn và tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh.

Example: No, I have lost contact with my primary school teachers because it has been a long time. However, I hope to meet them someday in the future.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tưởng bằng các từ nối. Hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách cô giáo giúp bạn và tránh câu bị ngắt quãng.

Example: As I mentioned before, I wasn't interested in learning English, but my favourite teacher made the lessons very interesting. Because of her, I started to enjoy English and it became one of my favourite subjects in primary school.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời một cách logic và tránh lặp lại thông tin. Sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng thì cho chính xác.

Example: Actually, I am a teacher now. I have been teaching since last year because I was inspired by my first grade English teacher. I decided to become a teacher when I grew up, and now I am proud to inspire other students.

× At first I didn't really like her because I didn't like English in general, but then she is the one.

✓ At first I didn't really like her because I didn't like English in general, but then she was the one.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb 'is' should be in the past tense 'was' to maintain tense consistency.

× No, it's have been, uh, it has been a long time.

✓ No, it has been a long time.

The phrase 'it's have been' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it has been' to express the present perfect tense indicating an action continuing up to now.

× So I lost contact with all my primary teacher.

✓ So I lost contact with all my primary teachers.

The word 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because 'all' refers to multiple individuals.

× So I and I hope I would have a chance in the future to see if misses them someday.

✓ So I hope I will have a chance in the future to see them someday.

The phrase 'So I and I hope' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'see if misses them' is incorrect; it should be 'see them'. The modal verb 'would' is replaced with 'will' to express future intention.

× As I has mentioned before, I wasn't very interested in learning English, but she's the one that made the lesson very interesting and indicating that make me feel like English is one of the best subject in primary school so I become.

✓ As I have mentioned before, I wasn't very interested in learning English, but she's the one who made the lessons very interesting and made me feel like English was one of the best subjects in primary school, so I became interested.

'As I has mentioned' should be 'As I have mentioned' for present perfect tense. 'Indicating that make me feel' is incorrect; it should be 'made me feel'. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to one among many. 'So I become' should be past tense 'so I became' to match the past context.

× Actually, I am a teacher now.

✓ Actually, I am a teacher now.

This sentence is correct as it expresses the present state.

× I became a teacher since last year for the reason that I love my English teacher first grade.

✓ I have been a teacher since last year because I loved my first grade English teacher.

'Became' with 'since' is incorrect; present perfect 'have been' is used to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. 'Love' should be past tense 'loved' to refer to past feelings. The phrase 'my English teacher first grade' is reordered to 'my first grade English teacher' for clarity.

× That's first grade so much that I decided when I grow up I will become a teacher.

✓ I loved my first grade teacher so much that I decided when I grew up I would become a teacher.

The phrase 'That's first grade so much' is unclear and incorrect. It is corrected to 'I loved my first grade teacher so much'. Also, 'when I grow up I will become' is changed to past tense 'when I grew up I would become' to reflect past intention.

× And now here I am, become an English teacher and inspire other students.

✓ And now here I am, becoming an English teacher and inspiring other students.

The verbs 'become' and 'inspire' should be in the present participle form 'becoming' and 'inspiring' to correctly follow 'here I am'.