Part 1
Examiner
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Candidate
Yes, I do have a favorite teacher. I met this teacher in a dance class and I regularly go to that dance class till now. I like her because she is really energetic and every time I go to her class I feel that I am recharged.
Examiner
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Candidate
No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher and also actually also my secondary school teacher. I never went back to my mother's school after I graduate.
Examiner
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Candidate
First of all, she's really energetic. Every time I go to her class, I feel full of energy and passion, which boost my motivation to learn how to dance. Also, she always encouraged me when I don't dance well.
Examiner
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidate
I never thought of being a teacher in the future because I'm not a I'm not an energetic person. I don't think I can influence my students in a good way. I'm really introverted and I think I'm not brave enough to speak in front of a lot of in front of a lot of students.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子结构较简单,缺少连接词使得表达略显单调。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构,并增加具体细节以增强表达效果。
Example: Yes, I have a favourite teacher whom I met in a dance class. I still attend her classes regularly because she is very energetic, and whenever I join her lessons, I feel recharged and motivated to improve my dancing skills.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答内容较为简单且有重复词汇,表达不够流畅。建议避免重复,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并补充具体原因或感受。
Example: No, I am not in touch with my primary or secondary school teachers because I have not visited my old schools since I graduated, so we lost contact over time.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答内容具体且有逻辑,但部分语法和词汇使用不够准确。建议注意时态和单复数形式,使用更多连接词使表达更自然。
Example: Firstly, she is very energetic, and every time I attend her class, I feel full of energy and passion, which boosts my motivation to learn dancing. Moreover, she always encourages me when I don't perform well, helping me improve.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答表达了个人观点,但存在重复和语法错误,且句子较长不够简洁。建议避免重复,简化句子结构,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: I have never considered becoming a teacher because I am not very energetic. Also, I am introverted and lack the confidence to speak in front of many students, so I don't think I could positively influence them.
× I never went back to my mother's school after I graduate.
✓ I never went back to my mother's school after I graduated.
这里的时间是过去发生的动作,应该使用过去时态。'graduate' 应改为过去式 'graduated'。
× which boost my motivation to learn how to dance.
✓ which boosts my motivation to learn how to dance.
关系代词 'which' 指代单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'boosts'。
× I never went back to my mother's school after I graduate.
✓ I never went back to my mother's school after I graduated.
这里的错误主要是时态问题,已在上面指出。
× I'm really introverted and I think I'm not brave enough to speak in front of a lot of in front of a lot of students.
✓ I'm really introverted and I think I'm not brave enough to speak in front of a lot of students.
句子中重复了 'in front of a lot of',应删除重复部分,保持表达简洁。