Teacher— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear due to some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to make your answer more concise and clear by using proper sentence structure and avoiding repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I have a favourite teacher. When I was in class 5, my math teacher, Mr. Krishnendu, was very charismatic. He made the lessons so interesting that we never wanted the class to end.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has many fillers like 'uh' and 'umm'. Try to complete your answer fully and avoid unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details about your contact with teachers.

Example: I always try to keep in touch with my primary school teachers, but due to my busy schedule, it is difficult to contact everyone. However, I regularly meet two of my favourite teachers when I get the chance.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples of how your teacher helped you.

Example: In my early days, I was very weak in English. My teacher helped me improve my pronunciation and fluency. Moreover, she guided me to build confidence when speaking English, which greatly improved my skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains many fillers and incomplete sentences. Try to reduce hesitation and complete your thoughts fully. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add specific reasons why you like this profession.

Example: Actually, I am currently working as a lecturer at a college in Dhaka. My daily tasks include delivering lectures, preparing question papers, and evaluating exam scripts. I believe teaching is the best profession for me because I enjoy helping students learn and grow.

× whenever he teaches us math, we it seems that the classes should not be ended and we enjoy his class so much that.

✓ whenever he teaches us math, it seems that the classes should not end and we enjoy his class so much.

The phrase 'we it seems' is incorrect and redundant. The correct structure is 'it seems that' to express the impression. Also, 'should not be ended' is passive and awkward; 'should not end' is more natural in active voice.

× it's seems, uh, quite difficult to keep in touch with everybody.

✓ it seems, uh, quite difficult to keep in touch with everybody.

The phrase 'it's seems' is incorrect because 'it's' (it is) and 'seems' are both verbs; only one verb should be used. The correct form is 'it seems'.

× I always try to keep in touch with my primary school teachers, though due to my busy schedule, it's seems, uh, quite difficult to keep in touch with everybody.

✓ I always try to keep in touch with my primary school teachers, though due to my busy schedule, it seems, uh, quite difficult to keep in touch with everybody.

The pronoun 'it's' is incorrectly used here; 'it' is the correct subject for the verb 'seems'. 'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' which conflicts with 'seems'.

× But I have two favorite teachers, umm, whom I met, uh.

✓ But I have two favorite teachers, umm, whom I have met, uh.

The verb tense is incomplete; 'whom I met' is past simple but the sentence context suggests present perfect 'whom I have met' to indicate experience up to now.

× my teacher helped me how to pronounce and how to speak fluently in English and how can I build my confidence in whenever speaking in English.

✓ my teacher helped me how to pronounce and how to speak fluently in English and how to build my confidence whenever speaking in English.

The phrase 'how can I build' is incorrect in indirect speech; it should be 'how to build'. Also, 'in whenever speaking' is incorrect; 'whenever speaking' suffices without 'in'.

× On top of that, uh, their guidance and their supervision is all.

✓ On top of that, uh, their guidance and their supervision are everything.

The subject 'guidance and supervision' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'is all' is awkward; 'are everything' is more natural.

× Actually, umm, I have been working as a lecturer at a College in Taka.

✓ Actually, umm, I am working as a lecturer at a college in Taka.

The present perfect continuous 'have been working' suggests ongoing action but the context is present simple for current occupation. Also, 'College' should not be capitalized unless part of a proper noun.

× delivering lectures, preparing the question paper or evaluating the exam scripts are my day-to-day activities now.

✓ delivering lectures, preparing question papers, or evaluating exam scripts are my day-to-day activities now.

'The question paper' and 'the exam scripts' are too specific; plural forms without 'the' are more appropriate to indicate general activities.

× so being a teacher, I can say that uh, I choose the best profession that matches with me because I find this profession.

✓ so being a teacher, I can say that uh, I have chosen the best profession that matches me because I find this profession fulfilling.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'have chosen' to indicate a decision made. 'Matches with me' is incorrect; 'matches me' is correct. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'fulfilling' completes the thought.