Part 1
Examiner
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Candidate
Yes, my favorite teacher is my chemistry teacher from my Senior High School. He is very professional and patient. He took the time to explain the difficult complex about the subject and lend my hand to help.
Examiner
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Candidate
No, I'm not still touched the English my primary school teacher because she don't like me. She saw that I was not good as studying the class so she didn't pay much attention for to me. That's why we lost contact after I leave primary school.
Examiner
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Candidate
My favorite teacher always pointing out my mistakes directly and explain clearly how to solve the problems. It's helped me understand the material better and improve my. Exam scores.
Examiner
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidate
No, actually 'cause I'm not a morning person, I mean energetic is specially in the morning is not enough, so I prefer to sleep in. So I think I don't want to be a teacher.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“difficult complex”应为“difficult concepts”,“lend my hand to help”表达不准确。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用,使表达更自然流畅。
Example: Yes, my favorite teacher is my chemistry teacher from senior high school. He was very professional and patient. He always took time to explain difficult concepts clearly and offered me extra help when I needed it.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰且不自然。建议加强语法基础,避免使用错误的时态和词汇,表达时要简洁明了。
Example: No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teacher. I think she didn't like me because I wasn't very good at studying in her class. So, we lost contact after I left primary school.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中时态和句子结构有误,如“always pointing out”应为“always pointed out”,句子不完整。建议注意时态一致和句子完整性,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: My favorite teacher always pointed out my mistakes directly and explained clearly how to solve the problems. This helped me understand the material better and improve my exam scores.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答表达不够清晰,语法和词汇使用不当。建议使用更准确的表达方式,避免口语化缩写,句子结构要完整。
Example: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I am not a morning person. I usually feel tired in the morning and prefer to sleep longer, so teaching might not suit me.
× My favorite teacher always pointing out my mistakes directly and explain clearly how to solve the problems.
✓ My favorite teacher always points out my mistakes directly and explains clearly how to solve the problems.
句子中动词形式错误,主语是第三人称单数,动词应使用第三人称单数形式(points, explains),而不是动名词形式(pointing)。
× He took the time to explain the difficult complex about the subject and lend my hand to help.
✓ He took the time to explain the difficult concepts about the subject and lent me a hand to help.
短语中“difficult complex”用词不当,应为“difficult concepts”;“lend my hand to help”中“my hand”错误,正确应为“me a hand”,表示“帮忙”;动词时态也需调整,过去时用“lent”。
× No, I'm not still touched the English my primary school teacher because she don't like me.
✓ No, I'm not still in touch with my primary school English teacher because she doesn't like me.
“touched”用错,应为“in touch with”表示保持联系;“she don't like me”主谓不一致,第三人称单数应为“doesn't”。
× She saw that I was not good as studying the class so she didn't pay much attention for to me.
✓ She saw that I was not good at studying in the class so she didn't pay much attention to me.
“good as studying”错误,应为“good at studying”;“pay attention for to me”介词错误,应为“pay attention to me”。
× That's why we lost contact after I leave primary school.
✓ That's why we lost contact after I left primary school.
“leave”应使用过去式“left”,因为描述的是过去发生的事情。
× My favorite teacher always pointing out my mistakes directly and explain clearly how to solve the problems.
✓ My favorite teacher always points out my mistakes directly and explains clearly how to solve the problems.
主语是第三人称单数,动词应使用第三人称单数形式,而不是动名词形式。
× It's helped me understand the material better and improve my. Exam scores.
✓ It has helped me understand the material better and improve my exam scores.
句子结构不完整,“my.”和“Exam scores.”分开,应合并为“my exam scores”,并使用现在完成时“has helped”。
× No, actually 'cause I'm not a morning person, I mean energetic is specially in the morning is not enough, so I prefer to sleep in.
✓ No, actually because I'm not a morning person, I mean I'm not energetic, especially in the morning, so I prefer to sleep in.
“'cause”应正式写为“because”;“energetic is specially in the morning is not enough”语序和用词错误,应为“I'm not energetic, especially in the morning”。
× She saw that I was not good as studying the class so she didn't pay much attention for to me.
✓ She saw that I was not good at studying in the class so she didn't pay much attention to me.
“good as studying”应为“good at studying”;“pay attention for to me”介词错误,应为“pay attention to me”。