Teacher— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and slightly redundant. Try to respond directly and clearly to the question by stating who your favourite teacher is and why. Avoid unnecessary pauses and fragmented sentences.

Example: Yes, I do have a favourite teacher from my college days. She was my chemistry professor who made learning very interesting and easy to understand.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer the question directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Example: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because I don't remember much about that time. However, I keep good contact with my college professors, and we share a strong bond.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Try to provide specific details about how your teacher helped you, using correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: My favourite teacher was my college chemistry professor, Mandeep Kaur. She helped me by teaching complex concepts in a simple way and encouraged us to think critically, which improved my understanding significantly.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many fragmented sentences. Try to organise your ideas logically, use linking words, and avoid repetition. Provide clear reasons for your choice and how you plan to achieve your goal.

Example: Definitely, I want to be a teacher in the future, which is why I am pursuing a Bachelor of Education starting next year. Since I am good at maths, this course will help me improve my teaching skills in that subject.

× I have don't have vivid account of my school time.

✓ I don't have a vivid account of my school time.

The phrase 'have don't have' is incorrect because it combines two auxiliary verbs improperly. The correct negative form is 'don't have'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'vivid account' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× And we share a great bond to each other.

✓ And we share a great bond with each other.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to use with 'share a bond' is 'with'. Hence, 'share a great bond with each other' is correct.

× Her name was Mandeep Kaur and.

✓ Her name was Mandeep Kaur.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is a conjunction and requires continuation. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× She taught us chemistry in a great way where we can learn by using critical thing.

✓ She taught us chemistry in a great way where we could learn by using critical thinking.

The phrase 'critical thing' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'critical thinking'. Also, 'can' should be changed to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Next year. To enhance my teaching skills I am I think I'm good at maths and by that I. Buy Bachelor of Education I can improve my mathematical skills.

✓ Next year, to enhance my teaching skills, I am pursuing a Bachelor of Education. I think I'm good at maths, and through this Bachelor of Education, I can improve my mathematical skills.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them properly with correct punctuation and structure improves clarity. 'Buy' is a typo and should be 'Bachelor'. Also, 'I am I think' is redundant and corrected to 'I think'.