Fishing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct vocabulary, and concise reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words. For example, say which fish you like, give one or two specific reasons (taste, health) and a brief example of how you eat it. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I really like eating fish, especially salmon. I eat it because it tastes great and is high in healthy omega‑3s, which I think are good for my heart. For instance, my mother often grills salmon with lemon and herbs, and I eat it twice a week.

Suggestion: Provide a direct answer followed by a brief, specific detail about when and why you go, using linking words. Correct collocations (’fish market’, ‘buy fresh fish’, ‘cook fish dishes’). One or two supporting sentences are enough.

Example: Yes, I go to the fish market every week to buy fresh fish and other ingredients. I prefer the market because the fish is fresher than in supermarkets, and I can ask the sellers for cooking tips.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and use linking words (e.g., ‘because’, ‘however’). Use correct forms and vocabulary (’fishing’, ‘fishermen’, ‘hot climate’). Provide a short example or contrast to make the point clearer.

Example: I don't think fishing is very popular in my country because our climate is usually hot, so people avoid spending long hours outdoors. However, fishing becomes more common in winter when the weather is cooler and fishermen can go out more comfortably.

× Yes, I love salmon and fruit fetch very much.

✓ Yes, I love salmon and fruit very much.

The word 'fetch' is incorrect here; it is a verb meaning to go and bring something. The intended meaning is listing food items (salmon and fruit), so remove 'fetch'. Also ensure parallel nouns: 'salmon and fruit' are both nouns. Suggestion: proofread for stray words and keep parallel structure.

× I usually tell my mother to cook it for me because I feel that it goods it is good for my health.

✓ I usually ask my mother to cook it for me because I feel that it is good for my health.

There are redundant and incorrect words: 'goods' is incorrect and 'it is good' was duplicated as 'it goods it is good'. Replace 'tell' with 'ask' to politely request someone to cook, and keep a single correct clause 'it is good for my health'. Suggestion: use 'ask' for requests and remove duplicated phrases.

× It also help me Boo.

✓ It also helps me, too.

Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'it' requires the third-person singular verb form 'helps'. 'Boo' seems to be a typo for 'too' meaning 'also'. Add a comma before 'too' if needed. Suggestion: check verb endings for he/she/it and correct typos.

× Yes, I've visited fish market every week to seek for fresh fish and good ingredients for making fish meal.

✓ Yes, I've visited the fish market every week to look for fresh fish and good ingredients for making fish meals.

Article is missing before 'fish market' (use 'the fish market' for a specific market). 'Seek for' is incorrect collocation in modern English; use 'look for' or 'seek'. 'Fish meal' is ambiguous—likely 'fish meals' (meals made with fish) or 'fishmeal' (animal feed). Here 'fish meals' fits. Suggestion: add definite article, use correct verb collocation, and pluralize 'meals' for generality.

× Yes, I've visited fish market every week to seek for fresh fish and good ingredients for making fish meal.

✓ Yes, I visit the fish market every week to look for fresh fish and good ingredients for making fish meals.

The original used present perfect 'I've visited' with 'every week', which suggests a habitual action; the simple present 'I visit' better expresses a regular habit. Alternatively, 'I have been visiting the fish market every week' is acceptable. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions or present perfect continuous for actions continuing up to now.

× I don't think so because our climate is rather hot, so everybody doesn't want to stay outside for fitching.

✓ I don't think so because our climate is rather hot, so everybody doesn't want to stay outside for fishing.

'Fitching' is a misspelling; correct word is 'fishing'. Also, 'everybody doesn't want' is grammatically acceptable but can sound awkward; prefer 'nobody wants to' or 'people don't want to'. Suggestion: correct spelling and consider using 'people don't want to stay outside' or 'nobody wants to stay outside' for clarity.

× But in winter, fisherman comes to.

✓ But in winter, fishermen come too.

Subject-verb agreement and number: 'fisherman' (singular) with 'comes' is possible but the sentence 'fisherman comes to' is incomplete and awkward. Use plural 'fishermen' with plural verb 'come'. 'To' is likely a typo for 'too' meaning 'also'. Suggestion: pluralize when speaking generally and use 'too' for 'also'.