Birthday— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và làm rõ hơn ý "makes their day really special" vì ý này chưa rõ ràng. Bạn cũng có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: On my birthday, I usually like to hang out with my friends because spending time together makes the day very special for all of us. For example, we often go outside to do some outdoor activities such as playing games or having a picnic, which I really enjoy.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ (ví dụ: 'hang out' nên là 'hung out'). Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như "more more" và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh dư thừa. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: When I was young, I usually hung out with my friends on my birthday. For example, we often played outdoor games like badminton, which I really enjoyed because it was both fun and a great way to stay active. Sometimes, we also went out to eat together, making the day even more memorable.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe it is very important to celebrate my birthday because it is a meaningful occasion that allows me to cherish special moments with my friends and family. For instance, I usually invite my close friends to a small party, where we share food and enjoy each other's company.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời thẳng thắn về kiến thức hạn chế nhưng nên tránh lặp từ và câu trả lời nên tập trung hơn vào câu hỏi. Bạn có thể mở rộng thêm lý do tại sao sinh nhật của Ho Chi Minh quan trọng để câu trả lời cụ thể hơn.

Example: Although I don't know much about important birthdays in China, in Vietnam, I believe Ho Chi Minh's birthday is the most important. This is because he is a highly respected national leader who played a crucial role in our country's history and inspired many people.

× When I was young, I usually hang out with my friends on my birthday.

✓ When I was young, I usually hung out with my friends on my birthday.

The sentence describes a habitual action in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'hung out' instead of the present tense 'hang out'.

× For example, we often play the outdoor games like badminton, which I really enjoyed it because it was both fun and a great way to stay active.

✓ For example, we often played outdoor games like badminton, which I really enjoyed because it was both fun and a great way to stay active.

The sentence refers to past habitual actions, so 'play' should be changed to past tense 'played'. Also, 'it' after 'enjoyed' is unnecessary and should be removed for grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes we also went out to eat together, which made the day even more special and more more memorable.

✓ Sometimes we also went out to eat together, which made the day even more special and more memorable.

The phrase 'more more memorable' contains a repeated word 'more'. Removing the duplicate 'more' corrects the quantifier usage.