Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите в прошедшем времени правильно и избегайте повторений. Начните с прямого предложения (I started using the internet at about seven) и добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте неопределённых фраз («in this age», «usually» дважды). Следите за согласованием времен и артиклями.

Example: I started using the internet at about seven years old. At that age I mostly searched for information about nature and the environment, especially animals and plants I saw in books.

Suggestion: Сделайте ответ более сжатым и естественным: начинайте с частоты (e.g. I go online several times a day), затем кратко объясните причины. Уберите лишние повторения «usually» и неверную фразу «chat with the Internet». Используйте связку (because, and) для логичности.

Example: I go online several times a day. As a student I often research study materials and also chat with friends or check news and social media.

Suggestion: Используйте правильные формы времени и избегайте повторов. Начните с краткого утверждения, затем укажите причину и конкретный пример. Замените «interested about» на «interested in», «in that time» на «at that time», и используйте прошедшее время «gave».

Example: Yes. When I was about ten I couldn't use the internet because I didn't have a phone. Instead I asked my parents about things I was interested in, and they gave me information about nature.

Suggestion: Ответ ясный и конкретный, но можно сделать более компактно и связно: начните с общего мнения, добавьте причину и пример. Следите за длиной — не более 4–5 предложений. Можно добавить одно предложение о том, что вы делаете, чтобы сократить время онлайн.

Example: Yes, I sometimes spend too much time online, especially on social media and streaming videos, which reduces my study and sleep time. For example, last week I scrolled late into the night and felt less productive the next day. Now I set screen-time limits to avoid that.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте ответ более чётко и грамотно: начните с общего утверждения, затем приведите 2–3 конкретных и связанных примера. Избегайте фраз «in my opinion» (лишнее), неверной грамматики («if weather is good» → «if the weather is good») и незавершённого последнего предложения. Используйте связки (for example, also, moreover).

Example: Without the internet I would spend more time outdoors and with family. For example, if the weather is good I would meet friends for walks or sports, and at home we would play board games or talk to relax.

× I start to use the Internet when I was about 7 years old and in this age I usually use Internet to find new information about the nature and environment.

✓ I started to use the Internet when I was about 7 years old, and at that age I usually used the Internet to find information about nature and the environment.

The sentence mixes present simple with past time reference 'when I was about 7 years old'. Use past tense 'started' and 'used' to match the past time frame. Also 'in this age' is unnatural; use 'at that age'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'Internet' and 'environment' for natural English. Suggestions: use consistent past tense for actions that happened in the past; replace 'in this age' with 'at that age'; include articles where required.

× Now I usually go online because I'm a student and I often need to find the necessary information for me about the subject, so I usually do it and also I usually chat with my friends and the Internet.

✓ Now I usually go online because I'm a student and I often need to find necessary information about my subjects, so I often do that and also chat with my friends online.

The original uses awkward phrasing and redundant 'usually' multiple times. 'Information for me about the subject' should be 'information about my subjects' and 'chat with my friends and the Internet' is incorrect; use 'chat with my friends online'. Keep present tense as it describes current habits. Suggestions: avoid repeating adverbs, use 'online' to indicate where chat happens, and use plural 'subjects' if referring to school topics.

× Yes, of course. When I was about 10 years old, I was very interested about the environment, but in that time I didn't have a phone, so I usually asked my parents about it and they usually give me some information.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was about 10 years old, I was very interested in the environment, but at that time I didn't have a phone, so I usually asked my parents about it and they usually gave me some information.

Use 'interested in' not 'interested about'. 'In that time' should be 'at that time'. Actions in the past require past tense: 'give' should be 'gave'. 'Usually' is acceptable but keep tense consistent. Suggestions: use correct preposition 'in' with 'interested' and match verb tense to past events.

× Yes, sometimes I do spend too much time online, especially when I get absorbed in social media or streaming videos, which tends to eat into my study and sleep time.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do spend too much time online, especially when I get absorbed in social media or streaming videos, which tends to eat into my study and sleep time.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as written; it correctly uses present simple to describe habitual behavior and 'tends to' to indicate general consequence. Suggestion: no change needed.

× For example, last week I found myself scrolling late into the night and felt less productive the next day.

✓ For example, last week I found myself scrolling late into the night and felt less productive the next day.

This sentence is correct: past simple 'found' and 'felt' correctly describe a past event. No grammatical change needed.

× In my opinion there are a lot of things that I can do without the Internet.

✓ In my opinion, there are a lot of things that I can do without the Internet.

The sentence is grammatically correct; adding a comma after 'In my opinion' improves clarity. 'There are' is used correctly to indicate existence. Suggestion: include the comma for natural written English.

× For example, I can work with my friends if weather is good.

✓ For example, I can work with my friends if the weather is good.

The phrase 'if weather is good' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'weather'. Use 'if the weather is good' to be grammatically correct. Suggestion: remember to use 'the' with 'weather' in conditional clauses.

× Also I can play different board games with my family and spend time with them because it helps me to relax and chill off.

✓ Also, I can play different board games with my family and spend time with them because it helps me relax and unwind.

'Chill off' is nonstandard; use 'unwind' or 'relax'. 'Helps me to relax' is correct but 'helps me relax' is more natural. Add a comma after 'Also' for clarity. Suggestion: choose natural collocations like 'unwind' instead of 'chill off'.

× Also I really enjoy too dreaming in the.

✓ Also, I really enjoy daydreaming.

The original is ungrammatical and incomplete: 'too dreaming in the.' is fragmentary and incorrect. 'Enjoy' should be followed by a gerund: 'enjoy daydreaming' or 'enjoy dreaming'. Remove 'too' or place it correctly ('also') and complete the thought. Suggestion: use 'daydreaming' to express pleasant idle thoughts and ensure the sentence is complete.