Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "used to start my first time" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Try to directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with linking words.

Example: I started using the internet when I was in class eight because I needed help with my homework. At that time, I asked my mother to use her smartphone to find information online.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and be specific about frequency. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct plural forms like 'informations' to 'information'.

Example: I go online almost every day to search for information and improve my academic performance.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains many filler words. Try to be more direct and clear. Use proper vocabulary and avoid invented words like 'googleize'. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, when I was in high school, the internet was not widely available because technology was less developed. Therefore, we couldn't use it to find information for our studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to balance benefits and drawbacks. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure.

Example: Yes, I think I spend a significant amount of time online. While it benefits me by providing information, it also affects my daily life negatively at times.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear due to grammar errors and repetition. Avoid filler words and use correct verb forms. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Without the internet, I would prefer to read books because they help improve my vocabulary and grammar. Reading also broadens knowledge and introduces new perspectives.

× So at that time I used to start my first time using the Internet.

✓ So at that time I started using the Internet for the first time.

The phrase 'used to start my first time' is incorrect. The correct past tense form 'started' should be used to indicate a completed action in the past. 'Used to' implies a habitual action, which does not fit here.

× I use Internet for almost every day UMM to search informations and UMM to improve my academic performance.

✓ I use the Internet almost every day to search for information and to improve my academic performance.

The word 'informations' is uncountable and should be 'information'. Also, 'use Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Almost every day' is the correct quantifier phrase.

× I use Internet for almost every day UMM to search informations and UMM to improve my academic performance.

✓ I use the Internet almost every day to search for information and to improve my academic performance.

The verb 'search' is usually followed by the preposition 'for' when indicating what is being searched. Also, 'use Internet' requires the article 'the'.

× the technology didn't umm, develop that most as compared to recent, now recent days.

✓ the technology didn't develop that much compared to recent days.

The phrase 'develop that most' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'develop that much' to indicate degree. Also, 'as compared to' is redundant; 'compared to' suffices.

× And then we don't have any Internet to googleize and source information umm, relating to the academy's performance.

✓ And then we didn't have any Internet to google and source information related to academic performance.

The tense should be past ('didn't have') to match the time frame. 'Googleize' is not a standard verb; 'google' is correct. 'Relating to the academy's performance' is awkward; 'related to academic performance' is clearer.

× Yes, I also sometimes consider that I'm spending my amount significant amount of time in umm the Internet and and being online that impact my on daily basis life and also it has some benefits also it have some drawbacks.

✓ Yes, I sometimes consider that I'm spending a significant amount of time on the Internet and being online, which impacts my daily life. It also has some benefits and some drawbacks.

The phrase 'my amount significant amount' is incorrect; 'a significant amount' is correct. 'Impact my on daily basis life' is ungrammatical; 'impacts my daily life' is correct. 'It have' should be 'it has' to agree with singular subject.

× Umm thought Internet, I prefer to umm read some books umm it will helps to enhance my vocabulary and grammar.

✓ Without the Internet, I prefer to read some books; they will help to enhance my vocabulary and grammar.

'Thought Internet' is incorrect; 'without the Internet' is appropriate. 'It will helps' is incorrect; modal verb 'will' is followed by base verb 'help' without 's'.

× Also it can diverse diverse knowledge and takes you into a different worlds and introduce you to a new perspectives.

✓ Also, it can provide diverse knowledge, take you into different worlds, and introduce you to new perspectives.

'Diverse diverse knowledge' is repetitive; one 'diverse' suffices. 'Can diverse knowledge' is incorrect; 'can provide diverse knowledge' is correct. 'A different worlds' is incorrect; 'different worlds' (plural) is correct. 'Introduce you to a new perspectives' mixes singular and plural; 'new perspectives' is correct.