Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but has grammatical errors and redundancy, such as repeating 'social' and awkward phrasing like 'was become'. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: I started using the Internet about 10 years ago when I was in high school. At that time, I mainly used it for researching school projects and keeping in touch with friends through social media. Since then, the Internet has become an essential part of my daily life.

Suggestion: Your answer has repetition ('mainly mainly') and some incorrect word choices like 'browser' instead of 'browse' and 'stay update'. Also, sentence structure is unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific.

Example: I usually go online several times a day, mainly to check emails, browse social media, and stay updated with the news. For example, in the evenings, I often catch up on articles or play games with friends online. The Internet is an important part of my daily routine.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, especially the last sentence. Avoid vague phrases like 'the limit and the limit my assets'. Use clear sentences with linking words to explain your point.

Example: Yes, I remember when I was a child, my parents limited my Internet use because they thought too much screen time would distract me from studying. For example, they only allowed me to use the Internet on weekends, which helped me focus on my schoolwork during the week.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Avoid redundancy like 'for and video gaming' and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to balance positive and negative points.

Example: Yes, I spend a lot of time online, mainly for entertainment like social media and video games. For example, I often scroll through video reels or chat with friends for an hour, which sometimes distracts me from important tasks. However, I also use the Internet for studying and learning new things.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors and incomplete thoughts. Avoid incorrect words like 'sausage' and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically with proper vocabulary.

Example: Without the Internet, life would be difficult for me. I would have to read books and newspapers, which can be boring and time-consuming. It would also be harder to find information quickly or stay connected with friends and family.

× I started using the Internet about 10 years ago when I was in a high school.

✓ I started using the Internet about 10 years ago when I was in high school.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'high school' because 'high school' is a general institution and does not require an article in this context.

× ...staying in touch with friends through social social media.

✓ ...staying in touch with friends through social media.

The word 'social' is repeated unnecessarily, which is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'social'.

× Since the Internet was become essential part of my daily life for both.

✓ Since the Internet has become an essential part of my daily life for both.

The phrase 'was become' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has become' is appropriate here. Also, 'essential part' requires the article 'an' before it.

× I usually go online several time a day, mainly mainly to check e-mail, browser, social media and stay update with the news.

✓ I usually go online several times a day, mainly to check e-mail, browse social media and stay updated with the news.

The plural form 'times' should be used after 'several'. 'Browser' is a noun but here the verb 'browse' is needed. 'Stay update' should be 'stay updated' to use the correct adjective form.

× For example, I often spend time in the evening catching up on article or setting with friends games.

✓ For example, I often spend time in the evening catching up on articles or playing games with friends.

'Article' should be plural 'articles' to match the context. 'Setting with friends games' is incorrect; it should be 'playing games with friends'.

× The Internet has become an essential part of my daily.

✓ The Internet has become an essential part of my daily life.

The word 'daily' is an adjective or adverb and needs a noun to complete the phrase; 'daily life' is the correct expression.

× Since the Internet was become essential part of my daily life for both.

✓ Since the Internet has become an essential part of my daily life for both.

The verb phrase 'was become' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has become' is appropriate to indicate a change over time.

× My parents were quite strict about screen time and believed that excessive Internet views could distract me from my study.

✓ My parents were quite strict about screen time and believed that excessive Internet use could distract me from my studies.

'Internet views' is incorrect; 'Internet use' is the correct term. 'My study' should be plural 'my studies' to refer to academic work.

× For example, the limit and the limit my assets to weekend, which helped me.

✓ For example, they limited my access to weekends, which helped me.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'They limited my access to weekends' is a clear and correct expression.

× I usually go online several time a day, mainly mainly to check e-mail, browser, social media and stay update with the news.

✓ I usually go online several times a day, mainly to check e-mail, browse social media and stay updated with the news.

Repeated for clarity: 'time' should be plural 'times'; 'browser' should be the verb 'browse'; 'stay update' should be 'stay updated'.

× I often find myself scrolling through videos reels or chatting with my friend for an hour with sometimes distract me from other important talks.

✓ I often find myself scrolling through video reels or chatting with my friends for an hour, which sometimes distracts me from other important tasks.

'Videos reels' should be 'video reels'; 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match context; 'with sometimes distract me' is incorrect and should be 'which sometimes distracts me'; 'talks' should be 'tasks'.

× However, I also use the Internet for studying and.

✓ However, I also use the Internet for studying.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly; removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× Without Internet I could not survive.

✓ Without the Internet, I could not survive.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'Internet'. Also, a comma after the introductory phrase improves readability.

× I think I sausage reading book newspaper.

✓ I think I enjoy reading books and newspapers.

The original sentence is unclear and contains a nonsensical word 'sausage'. It is corrected to a meaningful sentence.

× It's boring, it is boring.

✓ It's boring.

The phrase is repetitive; one instance is sufficient.

× It could be more time consuming, fine information or stay connected with friends and family, but it might also.

✓ It could be more time-consuming to find information or stay connected with friends and family, but it might also be beneficial.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. The sentence is completed for clarity.