Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更自然流畅。

Example: I started using the internet when I was in primary school. My father bought a computer, and since then I began to learn, play online games, and use social media like QQ.

Suggestion: 回答内容较为重复，且最后一句表达不清晰。建议避免重复，使用更准确的表达，并注意句子完整性。

Example: I go online almost every day to check messages and communicate with my friends and family through social media like WeChat and Weibo. It has become a regular part of my daily routine.

Suggestion: 回答中时态和表达不够准确，句子结构不够连贯。建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，使表达更自然。

Example: When I was in primary school, my father bought a computer for our home. I used to play on it very late at night, so my parents didn't allow me to use it anymore because staying up late is bad for my health.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议注意主谓一致和时态，简化句子结构，使表达更准确。

Example: Yes, I do. Every morning, I check my social media like WeChat or Weibo to see if anyone has sent me messages. I usually plan to check for five minutes, but I often end up spending an hour.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: I would feel a little lost because I rely on the internet for almost everything. I buy things online and pay for food through it. Without the internet, I would have to find other ways to do these things, which would be less convenient and more time-consuming.

× I remember it was in my primary school at that time my father bought a computer and from then I began to learn, play online games and also some use some social medias like QQ after that.

✓ I remember it was in my primary school when my father bought a computer, and from then I began to learn, play online games, and also use some social media like QQ.

句子中“at that time”用法不当，且“some use some social medias”结构重复且“social medias”应为不可数名词“social media”。建议简化句子结构，去掉多余词汇，使表达更清晰。

× I remember it was in my primary school at that time my father bought a computer and from then I began to learn, play online games and also some use some social medias like QQ after that.

✓ I remember it was in my primary school when my father bought a computer, and from then I began to learn, play online games, and also use some social media like QQ.

“some social medias”中“medias”应为不可数名词“media”，不需要复数形式。

× I remember it was in my primary school at that time my father bought a computer and from then I began to learn, play online games and also some use some social medias like QQ after that.

✓ I remember it was in my primary school when my father bought a computer, and from then I began to learn, play online games, and also use some social media like QQ.

“at that time”在此处用法不当，建议用“when”引导时间状语从句，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I use social media like WeChat and Weibo every day to check the message and communicate with my friends or family.

✓ I use social media like WeChat and Weibo every day to check messages and communicate with my friends or family.

“the message”应为复数形式“messages”，因为通常会有多条消息。

× It's become a day of my daily part.

✓ It has become a part of my daily routine.

原句表达不清，“a day of my daily part”语法错误且不符合英语习惯，建议改为“a part of my daily routine”更准确。

× It was in my primary school at that time. My father bought a computer for my own home and I used to play it very late at night.

✓ It was in my primary school. My father bought a computer for our home, and I used to play on it very late at night.

“for my own home”表达不自然，改为“for our home”更合适；“play it”应为“play on it”，因为“play”后面通常接介词“on”表示使用设备。

× So my parents didn't allow me to use the computer anymore because I think stay up late is bad for my health.

✓ So my parents didn't allow me to use the computer anymore because they thought staying up late was bad for my health.

主语和时态不一致，且“stay up late”应使用动名词形式“staying up late”，时态应与过去时一致。

× Yes I do, every morning I will check my social media like we chat or Weibo to see if anyone send me messages and every time you just want to check it for 5 minutes but when I realize it, it was already one hour.

✓ Yes, I do. Every morning I check my social media like WeChat or Weibo to see if anyone has sent me messages, and every time I just want to check it for 5 minutes, but when I realize it, it is already one hour.

“will”不适合表示习惯动作，改为一般现在时；“send”应为现在完成时“has sent”；“you”应改为“I”保持主语一致；“was”应为现在时“is”表示持续状态。

× I would feel a little lost because I use I rely on Internet for almost everything.

✓ I would feel a little lost because I rely on the Internet for almost everything.

句中“I use I rely”重复且错误，应删除“use”；“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I buying things online and also paying for food without it.

✓ I buy things online and also pay for food without it.

“buying”应改为动词原形“buy”以保持句子结构一致；“paying”同理改为“pay”。

× I will have to find another method to solve this problems.

✓ I will have to find another method to solve these problems.

“this problems”中“this”用于单数，复数应使用“these”。