Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'I started using Internet' twice, you can combine ideas and use linking words to make it more coherent. Also, be careful with grammar such as 'for educational as well as self-care videos for also' which is confusing. Try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use more precise vocabulary.

Example: I began using the internet when I was about 12 years old, primarily for school projects and educational purposes. As I grew older, I expanded its use to watch self-care videos and to connect with friends and family on social media.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by linking ideas smoothly and correcting minor grammar errors. For example, 'engaging with my friends, long distance family members' can be linked better. Also, avoid repeating 'I go online' unnecessarily. Use linking words like 'and' or 'because' to make your answer more natural and effective.

Example: I go online several times a day to check my emails and stay in touch with friends and family who live far away. Additionally, I use social media regularly because I do freelancing work.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but can be more concise and coherent. Avoid phrases like 'something like that' which are vague. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, try to use more natural expressions such as 'before my board exams' instead of 'when I was going to appear for the board exams'.

Example: I was never completely banned from using the internet, but before my 12th standard board exams, my parents restricted my phone usage. As a result, I couldn't connect with my friends online during that period.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, 'I think I spent so much time' should be 'I think I spend too much time'. Also, avoid repeating 'I have to' multiple times; instead, use linking words and combine sentences for fluency. Try to use more precise vocabulary like 'manage projects' instead of 'manage my project'.

Example: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because of my freelancing work. I need to manage multiple projects throughout the day, which involves checking emails, communicating with new clients, and maintaining regular contact with them.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys your idea but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. For example, 'I can't even imagine to live' should be 'I can't even imagine living'. Also, avoid repeating 'because' and try to make your sentences more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I can't imagine living without the internet, but if I had to, I would definitely spend more time with my loved ones since my hectic schedule rarely allows me to do so these days.

× I started using Internet when I was around 12 years old and I used to use Internet for school projects and educational purpose.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was around 12 years old and I used to use the Internet for school projects and educational purposes.

The word 'Internet' is a proper noun that requires the definite article 'the' before it. Also, 'educational purpose' should be pluralized to 'educational purposes' to correctly express multiple uses.

× As I grew older I started using Internet for educational as well as self-care videos for also I started using it for social media and engaging with my friends and family.

✓ As I grew older, I started using the Internet for educational as well as self-care videos. I also started using it for social media and engaging with my friends and family.

Again, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity. Adding a comma after 'older' improves readability.

× I go online several times a day. I use Internet for checking mails, engaging with my friends, long distance family members.

✓ I go online several times a day. I use the Internet for checking mails and engaging with my friends and long-distance family members.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'long distance' should be hyphenated as 'long-distance' when used as an adjective.

× Also I go online to check my social media pages as I do freelancing work.

✓ Also, I go online to check my social media pages as I do freelancing work.

A comma after 'Also' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× There is no such time when I wasn't allowed to use Internet.

✓ There was no such time when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet.

The past tense 'was' is appropriate here because the sentence refers to a past period. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× It happened with me when I was going to appear for the board exams in my 12th standard.

✓ It happened to me when I was going to appear for the board exams in my 12th standard.

The correct preposition is 'to' in the phrase 'happened to me'.

× My parents restricted my phone.

✓ My parents restricted my phone usage.

The sentence is unclear; adding 'usage' clarifies that access to the phone was restricted.

× So that time I was not able to connect with my friends on Internet.

✓ So at that time, I was not able to connect with my friends on the Internet.

The phrase 'at that time' is more natural. 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, I think I spent so much time online because of my freelancing work.

✓ Yes, I think I spend so much time online because of my freelancing work.

The present tense 'spend' is appropriate here because the question is about current habits.

× There are ample number of things I have to go check through.

✓ There are an ample number of things I have to check through.

The phrase 'an ample number' is correct; 'go check through' is awkward and should be simplified to 'check through'.

× I have to talk with them regularly.

✓ I have to talk to them regularly.

The correct preposition with 'talk' in this context is 'to' rather than 'with'.

× I can't even imagine to live without an Internet, but if I get a chance to live without an Internet, I would definitely spend time with my loved ones because I because of hectic schedule I never got to spend time with my loved ones these days.

✓ I can't even imagine living without the Internet, but if I get a chance to live without the Internet, I would definitely spend time with my loved ones because, due to my hectic schedule, I never get to spend time with them these days.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Imagine to live' is incorrect; it should be 'imagine living'. The phrase 'because I because of hectic schedule' is redundant and ungrammatical; it should be 'because, due to my hectic schedule'. Also, 'never got' should be 'never get' to match the present tense indicated by 'these days'.