Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more direct and natural by starting with a clear topic sentence. Avoid awkward phrasing like "I've started the usage of Internet"; instead, say "I started using the internet when I was a teenager." Also, keep your answer concise and avoid unnecessary words.

Example: I started using the internet when I was a teenager. I can't remember the exact year, but it was during my high school days.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing information. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. For example, say how often you go online and why, using simple and natural language.

Example: I go online every day because I need the internet for my education and work. Also, I often check social media to stay in touch with my family and friends.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by using smoother linking words and correcting minor grammar mistakes. For example, use "where the internet and mobile phones were completely prohibited" and add "so" to connect ideas naturally.

Example: Yes, I remember when I was a postgraduate student at Kerala University. I lived in a ladies' hostel where the internet and mobile phones were completely prohibited, so I struggled a lot to stay connected with my loved ones.

Suggestion: Try to express your opinion more clearly and use correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and use linking words like "although" or "however" to connect contrasting ideas. Also, use natural phrases like "spend too much time online" and "online platforms."

Example: Although I know that spending too much time online is bad for my health, I have to use the internet a lot for my job and education because everything depends on online platforms.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains grammar errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Use natural expressions like "I would struggle without the internet" and "I would find alternative ways to do my tasks."

Example: I would struggle a lot without the internet because I rely on it for education, work, and shopping. However, I would try to find alternative solutions to complete my daily tasks.

× Honestly I can't recall the exact time, but most probably I've started the usage of Internet even from my teenage years.

✓ Honestly I can't recall the exact time, but most probably I started using the Internet even from my teenage years.

The present perfect tense 'I've started' is incorrectly used here because the action refers to a specific time in the past ('from my teenage years'). The simple past tense 'started' is appropriate to indicate a completed action in the past. Also, 'the usage of Internet' is awkward; 'using the Internet' is more natural.

× Honestly I can't recall the exact time, but most probably I've started the usage of Internet even from my teenage years.

✓ Honestly I can't recall the exact time, but most probably I started using the Internet since my teenage years.

The preposition 'from' is less appropriate here; 'since' is used to indicate the starting point of an action continuing to the present. Also, 'the usage of Internet' is better expressed as 'using the Internet'.

× Azim completed a rally on Internet for pursuing my education and my job.

✓ I use the Internet for pursuing my education and my job.

The original sentence is unclear and seems unrelated to the question. The subject 'Azim' and 'completed a rally' do not fit the context. The corrected sentence directly answers the question about how often the student goes online, clarifying the purpose of Internet use.

× I have it to be online once in a while and also I have a habit of checking the social media to check whether there is any message from my relatives or friends.

✓ I try to be online once in a while, and I also have a habit of checking social media to see whether there are any messages from my relatives or friends.

The phrase 'I have it to be online' is incorrect; 'I try to be online' is more natural. 'Check whether there is any message' should be plural 'are any messages' because 'messages' is countable and plural here.

× I have a habit of checking the social media to check whether there is any message from my relatives or friends.

✓ I have a habit of checking social media to see whether there are any messages from my relatives or friends.

When referring to multiple possible messages, the plural form 'messages' should be used with 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'the social media' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× Exactly. I can remember when I was a PG student in Kerala University, I used to live in a ladies hostel where the Internet, even mobile phone were completely prohibited.

✓ Exactly. I can remember when I was a PG student at Kerala University, I used to live in a ladies' hostel where the Internet and even mobile phones were completely prohibited.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' for universities. 'Ladies hostel' should be possessive 'ladies' hostel'. 'Mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to match 'were'. Also, 'the Internet' is correct here as a specific service.

× I struggled a lot to stay connected with my favorite ones at that time.

✓ I struggled a lot to stay connected with my loved ones at that time.

The phrase 'favorite ones' is awkward; 'loved ones' is more natural when referring to relatives or close friends.

× Even though I know the more screen time is not good for our health advice, but I should spend more time in Internet and stay in online to continue my jobs and my education.

✓ Even though I know that more screen time is not good for our health, I still have to spend more time on the Internet and stay online to continue my job and my education.

The phrase 'the more screen time' is incorrect; 'more screen time' is correct without 'the'. 'Health advice' is misplaced; it should be 'for our health'. 'Spend more time in Internet' should be 'on the Internet'. 'Stay in online' should be 'stay online'. 'Jobs' should be singular 'job' to match the context.

× Everything is related to different online platform.

✓ Everything is related to different online platforms.

The noun 'platform' should be plural 'platforms' to match 'different'. Also, no preposition change needed here, but plural form is necessary.

× It will be still struggling for me if there is Internet, I'm completely ready on it for different daily purposes like education, job, even shopping is also depend on different kinds of online plans.

✓ It will still be a struggle for me if there is no Internet; I'm completely dependent on it for different daily purposes like education, job, and even shopping, which also depend on different kinds of online platforms.

The phrase 'It will be still struggling' is incorrect; 'It will still be a struggle' is correct. 'If there is Internet' should be 'if there is no Internet' to make sense. 'I'm completely ready on it' is incorrect; 'I'm completely dependent on it' is correct. 'Shopping is also depend' should be 'shopping also depends'. 'Online plans' should be 'online platforms'.

× So however I will find something alternate solution to do the task if there is no Internet.

✓ So, however, I will find an alternative solution to do the task if there is no Internet.

The conjunctions 'So' and 'however' are both used to connect ideas but should be separated by commas. 'Alternate solution' should be 'an alternative solution' for correct article and adjective use.