Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'increase 6' và 'kite rememberable'.

Example: I started using the internet when I was six years old, which is about six years ago. It was my first time learning how to use Google, and it was a memorable experience for me.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ như 'like' nhiều lần. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

Example: I go online almost every day to use social media platforms like TikTok, Facebook, and Instagram. These help me stay updated with news and keep in touch with my friends.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Hãy tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'elite half' và sửa lỗi chia động từ.

Example: Yes, I wasn't allowed to use the internet during important exams like mid-term or final tests because I needed to concentrate on studying. I also avoided using it to prevent distractions.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng về thói quen sử dụng internet của mình.

Example: Yes, I do spend a lot of time online, but mostly on my phone during free time or when I'm bored. However, during the school year, I focus more on my studies and spend less time online.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi như 'hanging out are going'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên.

Example: Without the internet, I would probably hang out more. I don't like staying in one place for too long, especially without my phone. I enjoy going to the park alone or with friends to relax.

× If I remember correctly, I'm been using the first time I use the Internet, that is when I increase 6.

✓ If I remember correctly, I have been using the Internet since I was six.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm been' which is not a valid verb form. The correct present perfect continuous form is 'I have been'. Also, 'the first time I use the Internet' is awkward; it should be 'since I was six' to indicate the starting point of usage.

× That's mean about six years ago.

✓ That means about six years ago.

The verb 'mean' should be in the present tense 'means' to agree with the subject 'That'. 'That's' is a contraction of 'That is', so the verb should be singular present tense.

× That's the first time that I know how to Google and that is a kite rememberable experience for me.

✓ That's the first time that I knew how to Google and that is a quite memorable experience for me.

The verb 'know' should be in past tense 'knew' to match 'the first time'. 'kite rememberable' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'quite memorable' to express a strong impression.

× like I almost go on like everyday like using some social media platforms like TikTok, Facebook or Instagram that you help me keep on track with every every nudes and I need to connection with my friends too.

✓ I almost go online every day using some social media platforms like TikTok, Facebook, or Instagram that help me keep track of every news and I need to connect with my friends too.

The phrase 'go on like everyday like using' is awkward; 'go online every day using' is correct. 'that you help me' should be 'that help me' because the platforms are the subject. 'keep on track with every every nudes' is incorrect; it should be 'keep track of every news'. 'I need to connection' should be 'I need to connect'.

× Yes I do that as when an elite half my test like mid term test or final Test that I need to be concentrate and focus on study.

✓ Yes, I do, especially when I have important tests like mid-term or final tests and I need to concentrate and focus on studying.

The original sentence has many errors: 'do that as when an elite half my test' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'especially when I have important tests'. 'I need to be concentrate' should be 'I need to concentrate'. 'focus on study' should be 'focus on studying'.

× So I really use Internet or maybe I don't want to use too because I think it make me distract from my work.

✓ So I really don't use the Internet or maybe I don't want to use it too because I think it distracts me from my work.

'use Internet' should be 'use the Internet' (article needed). 'it make me distract' is incorrect; it should be 'it distracts me'. 'distract from my work' is correct but needs the verb agreement fixed.

× Yes, I could say yes, but I'm not on the tablet kid like I just you my phone whenever I have free time or I board up, but just in the summer vacation like this time during the school year and still focus on my study.

✓ Yes, I could say yes, but I'm not a tablet kid; I just use my phone whenever I have free time or I am bored, but only during summer vacation. During the school year, I still focus on my studies.

'I'm not on the tablet kid' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not a tablet kid'. 'I just you my phone' should be 'I just use my phone'. 'I board up' is incorrect; it should be 'I am bored'. 'focus on my study' should be 'focus on my studies'.

× So at the time that I go online is not really much.

✓ So the time that I go online is not really much.

'at the time that I go online' is awkward; 'the time that I go online' is better. The sentence is still a bit informal but acceptable.

× I probably say that I would hanging out.

✓ I would probably say that I would hang out.

'would hanging out' is incorrect; the verb after 'would' should be in base form 'hang out'.

× I don't want to stay at one place for a long time, especially when I don't have my mobile phone, so it would be very bored.

✓ I don't want to stay in one place for a long time, especially when I don't have my mobile phone, so I would be very bored.

'stay at one place' should be 'stay in one place'. 'it would be very bored' is incorrect; 'I would be very bored' is correct because 'bored' describes a feeling of a person.

× So I choose to hanging out are going with my friends or just myself.

✓ So I choose to hang out or go with my friends or just by myself.

'choose to hanging out' is incorrect; it should be 'choose to hang out'. 'are going' is incorrect here; it should be 'or go'. 'just myself' should be 'just by myself'.

× I love to go to the park and sit there an inch.

✓ I love to go to the park and sit there for a while.

'sit there an inch' is incorrect and unclear; 'sit there for a while' is the correct expression to indicate spending some time sitting.