Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答有點不自然且有語法錯誤，建議用完整句子並避免重複。可以直接回答問題，然後用一兩句話解釋原因。

Example: I started using the internet when I entered high school because my parents were strict about my internet use, thinking it wasn't safe to use it freely.

Suggestion: 回答時要注意語句流暢，避免斷句不完整。可以用連接詞讓句子更連貫，並具體說明頻率。

Example: Nowadays, I am online almost all the time, which I know is unhealthy. I struggle with this habit and am trying to reduce my screen time.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且語法錯誤多，建議用完整句子並清楚表達意思，避免斷句。

Example: Yes, when I was in junior high school, I wasn't allowed to use the internet. All my classmates had phones and used social media like Snapchat and Instagram, so I felt left out.

Suggestion: 回答中有很多停頓和語法錯誤，建議用流暢的句子表達意見，並用連接詞連接想法。

Example: Yes, I definitely spend too much time online. It's a big problem for me because I use my smartphone almost every free moment, which affects my daily life.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且語法錯誤，建議用完整句子並清楚表達想法，避免句子中斷。

Example: Without the internet, I would spend more time learning new skills and doing exercises like skating, surfing, and drawing, which I really enjoy.

× I started using the Internet when I went into high school. Because my parents are pretty strict about my use. Usage of the Internet because they think it's not really safe thing for me to use whenever I want.

✓ I started using the Internet when I went into high school because my parents are pretty strict about my use of the Internet since they think it's not really safe for me to use it whenever I want.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'Because' should not start a sentence here; it should connect the clauses. Also, 'usage of the Internet' is awkward and should be 'use of the Internet'. The phrase 'not really safe thing' is incorrect; it should be 'not really safe'. Combine the sentences to form a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× Now for now I. Almost stay online every single second. I think it's really unhealthy and I really struggle with it and want to change the situation, but yeah, I'm still working on it.

✓ Now, I almost stay online every single second. I think it's really unhealthy, and I really struggle with it and want to change the situation, but yeah, I'm still working on it.

The phrase 'Now for now I.' is incomplete and confusing. It should be simplified to 'Now, I'. Also, adding commas improves readability. The rest of the sentence is acceptable.

× Yes, in my junior high school, I wasn't. Allowed to use Internet yet, but every classmate in my class. Have a phone? Yeah, I'm the only one who just the hassle. And everyone is. Using Snapchat, Instagram and that make me.

✓ Yes, in my junior high school, I wasn't allowed to use the Internet yet, but every classmate in my class had a phone. Yeah, I was the only one who had the hassle, and everyone was using Snapchat, Instagram, and that made me feel left out.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'I wasn't. Allowed' should be combined. 'Have a phone?' is a question but used incorrectly; it should be a statement 'had a phone'. 'Who just the hassle' is incorrect; it should be 'who had the hassle'. 'Everyone is. Using' should be 'everyone was using'. 'That make me' is incomplete; it should be 'that made me feel left out' or similar. The corrections fix sentence fragments and verb tense consistency.

× Yeah, definitely in that is honestly the biggest problem I am struggling with. I think. Uhm. Smartphone is kind out literally destroy me because. I spent almost every second of my free time on it.

✓ Yeah, definitely, that is honestly the biggest problem I am struggling with. I think the smartphone is kind of literally destroying me because I spend almost every second of my free time on it.

The original sentences are fragmented and have awkward phrasing. 'In that is' is incorrect; it should be 'that is'. 'Smartphone is kind out literally destroy me' is incorrect; it should be 'the smartphone is kind of literally destroying me'. 'I spent' should be 'I spend' to match present tense. Removing unnecessary pauses and fixing verb forms improves clarity.

× I have. Learned so many skills in I really like to do different kind of exercise like skating, surfing, summer skating, Englander and sometimes drawing and.

✓ I have learned so many skills. I really like to do different kinds of exercise like skating, surfing, summer skating, inline skating, and sometimes drawing.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'I have. Learned' should be 'I have learned'. 'Different kind of exercise' should be 'different kinds of exercise'. 'Englander' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'inline skating' fits better. The sentence should end properly without 'and.' The corrections fix sentence fragments, plural forms, and complete the sentence.