Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "compared to have how fast". Try to use simpler, more natural expressions and check your sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

Example: I started using the internet when I was about 13 years old. At that time, we had dial-up connections, which were quite slow but exciting because it allowed me to communicate with friends and learn new things. It was very different from the fast and easy internet access we have today.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains fragmented sentences and awkward phrasing. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be more specific about your online habits and avoid vague expressions.

Example: I go online several times a day because I use the internet to communicate with friends and family, especially those living abroad. It also helps me learn new things and stay updated with news from different parts of the world.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains incomplete sentences. Make sure to answer directly and clearly, using complete sentences. Also, avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases like "Did you?" and focus on providing a coherent response with supporting details.

Example: Yes, I remember when I was in high school, my parents banned internet use at home during exam periods to help me focus better on my studies.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use complete sentences and avoid trailing off at the end.

Example: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I use it to learn new things and stay in touch with friends who live abroad. However, sometimes I feel I should reduce my screen time to focus on other activities.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear words like "Padre" and "families". Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, organize your ideas clearly and avoid redundancy.

Example: Sometimes when I overuse the internet, I take a day off from it. During that time, I read books, do some drawing, work on my hobbies, and spend quality time with my family.

× It was a completely different experience compared to have how fast and easy Internet access is today.

✓ It was a completely different experience compared to how fast and easy Internet access is today.

The phrase 'compared to have how fast' is incorrect because 'have' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. The correct form is 'compared to how fast,' where 'how' introduces the comparison and 'fast' is an adjective describing Internet access.

× Well, these days we are online every second of our lives because we need that to communicate with each other and the relating.

✓ Well, these days we are online every second of our lives because we need it to communicate with each other and related communities.

The phrase 'and the relating' is incomplete and unclear. It seems the intended meaning is 'related communities' or 'related regions.' Also, 'that' should be 'it' to correctly refer to 'being online.' The sentence structure needs adjustment for clarity and correctness.

× With in other regions.

✓ Within other regions.

The phrase 'With in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'within' as a single word meaning 'inside' or 'in the scope of.' Splitting it into two words is a common mistake.

× Abroad and that and other communities, which is interesting and helpful to improve our knowledge.

✓ Abroad and other communities, which are interesting and helpful to improve our knowledge.

The phrase 'and that and other communities' is awkward and unclear. Removing 'that' and correcting the verb agreement from 'is' to 'are' (since 'communities' is plural) improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I think it was about 20 years ago when I had. An exam and actually I studied in high school and my parents decided to ban Internet in our home to increase our focus. And knowledge.

✓ Well, I think it was about 20 years ago when I had an exam while I was studying in high school, and my parents decided to ban Internet use in our home to increase our focus and knowledge.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper connection. Combining them into a coherent sentence with correct conjunctions and article usage improves readability and grammatical correctness. Also, 'ban Internet' should be 'ban Internet use' for clarity.

× Did you?

✓ Did you?

This sentence is a question fragment and does not contain a grammar error related to the provided problem types. No correction needed.

× Well, I think so, because we all need to. Spend a lot of time on line to increase our knowledge and actually communicate with each other, especially our friends who live in abroad.

✓ Well, I think so, because we all need to spend a lot of time online to increase our knowledge and actually communicate with each other, especially our friends who live abroad.

The phrase 'on line' should be 'online' as one word. Also, 'in abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' does not require a preposition. Removing 'in' corrects the phrase.

× And obviously we spend a lot of time in the.

✓ And obviously we spend a lot of time on it.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'In the' is an incomplete prepositional phrase. Replacing it with 'on it' refers back to 'the internet' and completes the sentence logically.

× Well, actually there sometimes when I overuse Internet I decide to not using it for one day and at that moment I read more books, do Padre or drawing and do my favorite works and spend a lot of time with my families.

✓ Well, actually sometimes when I overuse the Internet, I decide not to use it for one day, and at that moment I read more books, do painting or drawing, do my favorite work, and spend a lot of time with my family.

Several errors here: 'decide to not using' should be 'decide not to use' (correct modal verb and verb form). 'Padre' is likely a typo for 'painting.' 'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to favorite activities. 'Families' should be singular 'family' unless referring to multiple families. Also, 'there sometimes' is awkward; 'sometimes' alone suffices. Adding 'the' before 'Internet' is necessary.