Sharing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and precise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundant phrases and grammatical errors (e.g., “nowadays social society”), and expand with one specific example and a linking word. Keep to at most 3–4 short sentences.

Example: Yes, my parents taught me to share from a young age. For example, they encouraged me to lend books and toys to my classmates so we could all enjoy them. Because of that, I learned to be considerate and make friends more easily.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and complete sentences. Answer directly about now or childhood depending on the question; here the examiner asked generally, so say what you like to share now or in the past. Avoid saying you give homework (it sounds odd) and finish your sentence. Provide a linking word to explain why.

Example: I usually share items like books, notes and games with friends. For instance, I lend video games and class notes because sharing helps us learn and have fun together.

Suggestion: Phrase reasons more clearly and correct grammar. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like “because” or “because of”. Avoid vague phrases and fix mistakes (“you are talk about”).

Example: I don’t think money is suitable for sharing, because it can easily cause disagreements. For example, borrowing money can lead to misunderstandings about repayment.

Suggestion: Use subject pronouns and grammar correctly, and make the answer concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a short example and a reason using a linking word like “because” or “so”.

Example: Yes. My friend and I often share study notes because it helps us cover more material and prepare better for exams.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct answer and fix grammar and word choice (“Absolutely” is odd here; “pres pursue” is incorrect). Break into two sentences: name the person and give a concise reason with a linking word. Avoid long run-on sentences.

Example: I would tell my parents first. They always support and encourage me, so I like to share good news with them because they celebrate my achievements.

Suggestion: Be slightly more specific and use correct verb forms and tenses. Start with a topic sentence naming the kinds of news, then add a brief reason or example with a linking word such as “for example” or “because”.

Example: I share personal updates like school or work progress and sometimes discuss current affairs. For example, when we haven’t seen each other for a while, we catch up on what’s new in our lives and talk about recent news stories.

× I always thought to share things with friends.

✓ I always thought about sharing things with friends.

The verb 'thought' requires a preposition and a gerund to express this idea. Use 'think about' + gerund ('sharing'). This fixes verb pattern and makes the sentence natural.

× My parents always told me that giving is important in nowadays social society.

✓ My parents always told me that giving is important in today's society.

'Nowadays' is an adverb and 'social society' is redundant. Use the possessive 'today's' to modify 'society' and drop 'social'. This produces a concise, natural phrase.

× When I was a child, I usually share my video games and toys with my friends.

✓ When I was a child, I usually shared my video games and toys with my friends.

The sentence refers to a past habitual action, so the past tense 'shared' is required. Using present tense 'share' creates a tense mismatch.

× Besides that, I always give them my homework and.

✓ Besides that, I always gave them my homework.

The sentence is incomplete and mixes present with past context. Remove the trailing 'and' and use past tense 'gave' to match the past-time frame.

× I think money is not good for sharing.

✓ I think money is not good to share.

'Not good for sharing' is awkward; 'not good to share' is more natural. This changes the verb pattern to an infinitive and improves fluency.

× You can have financially conflicts easily when you are talk about money.

✓ You can easily have financial conflicts when you talk about money.

'Financially conflicts' is incorrect: 'financial' is the adjective modifying 'conflicts'. Also verb form 'are talk' is wrong; use simple present 'talk' for general statements. Adverb placement 'easily' is moved before the verb for natural flow.

× Yes, me and my friend usually share notes because we can help each other studying so we can pass the exams together.

✓ Yes, my friend and I usually share notes because we can help each other study so we can pass the exams together.

Use correct subject pronoun order 'my friend and I' instead of 'me and my friend'. Also 'help each other studying' should be 'help each other study' (bare infinitive after 'help'). This corrects pronoun usage and verb form.

× Absolutely my parents, they always support me and give me motivation to do and pres pursue my dreams so when there is something good I always let them know first.

✓ Absolutely my parents; they always support me and give me motivation to pursue my dreams, so when there is something good I always let them know first.

Sentence contained a duplicated or broken phrase 'to do and pres pursue' and run-on structure. Remove the erroneous words and use 'pursue my dreams'. Also separate clauses with punctuation for clarity. Maintain present tense 'support' and 'give' for habitual truth.

× We usually exchange our personal updates and sometimes share about current affairs because we haven't talked to each other for a long period.

✓ We usually exchange personal updates and sometimes share news about current affairs because we haven't talked to each other for a long time.

'Share about' is unnatural—use 'share news about' or just 'share'. 'A long period' is awkward; 'a long time' is the natural expression. Also 'our personal updates' -> 'personal updates' is cleaner but optional.