News— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (e.g. 'on many platforms', 'necessary for information'), avoid repetition, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add a brief reason or example using a linking word (because/so) to support your statement.

Example: Yes, I am. I get news every day on several platforms, like news websites and social media such as Instagram and Twitter, because they keep me updated quickly. For example, I often check headlines in the morning to know important events.

Suggestion: Respond directly with one or two clear methods, use correct phrases (e.g. 'I usually find news on Google' or 'via social media'), and use linking words to explain why or give a brief example. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Example: I usually find news through Google search and social media. For instance, I search keywords on Google for detailed articles, and I also follow news accounts on social media for quick updates.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear statement about whether you would like to be a journalist. Use correct verb forms (e.g. 'I once had a dream of becoming a journalist' or 'I would like to be a journalist') and explain reasons with connecting words (because/so) using specific examples of tasks you enjoy (researching, writing, interviewing).

Example: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because I enjoy researching and writing about topics that interest me. For example, investigating local stories and interviewing people helps me learn and share useful information.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a simple past sentence ('Yes, I read... this morning') then give one clear detail. Use correct names and avoid repetition. If unsure of facts, keep description general. Use linking words to connect sentences.

Example: Yes, I read the news this morning about the UEFA Champions League final. The report covered the match result and highlights between Bayern Munich and Arsenal, and I enjoyed reading a summary of the key moments.

Suggestion: Make a concise, direct response (Yes/No + frequency), then give one specific reason or example using linking words (because/so). Avoid vague phrases like 'at the time context' and finish the sentence clearly.

Example: Yes, we often discuss the news, especially important political or economic stories, because they affect our daily lives. For example, my friends and I talk about election updates and how policies might influence jobs.

× I'm interested in news. Every day I watch news in many platforms such as website, social media such as Instagram, threads, Twitter and I think that it might necessarily of the informations. So I think that news is part of our is part of my basic information.

✓ I'm interested in the news. Every day I watch the news on many platforms such as websites and social media like Instagram, Threads, and Twitter, and I think it is necessary information. So I think the news is part of my basic knowledge.

Errors: incorrect article use before 'news' and 'websites'; plural/singular and word choice ('informations' incorrect) and awkward phrasing. Suggestion: use 'the news' for general news, 'on' for platforms, plural 'websites', replace 'informations' with 'information' (uncountable), and streamline sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 6.

× I finally find news from the Google such as I just stick to the Google search engines to know or I mentioned the keywords or actually I found it through the social media such as I click on the social media so I click more on that.

✓ I usually find news on Google; I use Google Search and type keywords, or I find it through social media by clicking on posts.

Errors: wrong preposition 'from the Google' should be 'on Google'; unnecessary article 'the' before 'Google' and 'search engines' awkward. Suggestion: use 'on' for platforms, 'use Google Search' and 'type keywords', and simplify 'click on posts' to describe finding news. Grammar problem type ID: 11.

× I ever had dream as a journalist because, uh, writing process, look for the informations, certain informations about something that I'm curious about are the biggest thing that I would like to manifest. OK.

✓ I once had a dream of becoming a journalist because the writing process and researching certain information about things I'm curious about are the main reasons I would like to pursue it.

Errors: 'I ever had dream' incorrect tense/word choice; 'as a journalist' should be 'of becoming a journalist'; 'informations' wrong plural; awkward noun-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'once' for past occurrence, 'dream of becoming', 'researching' or 'looking for information', and 'information' uncountable. Grammar problem type ID: 5.

× I read the news in this morning and I read about the the result of the UEFA Champions League, one of the biggest football competitions in Europe, that it indicate the result of the Harrison German and Arsenal's FC, you know, final of the UFO Champions League. It's very, very.

✓ I read the news this morning and I read about the result of the UEFA Champions League, one of the biggest football competitions in Europe, which showed the result of Bayern (or 'Harris on German' unclear) and Arsenal in the Champions League final. It was very exciting.

Errors: use 'this morning' without 'in'; repetition 'the the'; 'it indicate' wrong tense and structure — use past tense 'showed' or 'indicated'; team name 'Harrison German' unclear — replace with correct team name (e.g., Bayern Munich) and 'Arsenal' does not need 'FC' here; 'UFO' incorrect. 'It's very, very.' is incomplete; change to 'It was very exciting.' Suggestion: use simple past for events that already happened and correct article usage. Grammar problem type ID: 5.

× Sometime the news that we know each other is the bridge to our discussions and communications because it also depends on the knowledge with our daily lives in a political economy or at the time context. So I think that news is the.

✓ Sometimes the news we know about is a bridge to our discussions and communication because it relates to our daily lives, political economy, or current context. So I think the news is important.

Errors: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'; 'the news that we know each other' is ungrammatical—use 'the news we know about'; 'communications' better singular 'communication' in this context; awkward phrase 'depends on the knowledge with our daily lives' replaced with 'relates to our daily lives'; sentence ended abruptly — finish idea. Suggestion: correct adverb form, simplify relative clause, and complete the final thought. Grammar problem type ID: 6