Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be grammatically accurate, concise and natural. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix verb tense errors (use 'didn't have' / 'I didn't have a bike'). Add a linking word if you give an extra reason.

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I played tennis and my parents thought it would distract me from training. However, I sometimes borrowed friends' bikes to ride in the park.

Suggestion: Improve fluency and clarity by using correct grammar and smoother linking words. Use singular/plural correctly and avoid filler or unclear fragments. Give one clear example of how people use bikes and a specific group who ride them.

Example: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people use them as a cheap and convenient mode of transportation for short trips, and children often ride bikes for fun in parks and residential areas.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child because I used to play tennis and that was that was my sport and my parents didn't buy me one.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I used to play tennis and that was my sport, and my parents didn't buy me one.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I don't have' with past context 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'I didn't have' to match the time frame. Also remove the duplicated phrase 'that was' for clarity and add a comma before the conjunction 'and' to connect clauses. Suggestion: ensure verbs reflect the same time frame (past) for past events.

× In my country bike bike are very popular.

✓ In my country, bikes are very popular.

The original repeats 'bike' and uses singular 'bike' with plural verb 'are.' Use the plural noun 'bikes' to agree with the plural verb 'are.' Also add a comma after the introductory phrase 'In my country.' Suggestion: match noun number with the verb and avoid accidental repetition.

× They use to MO I they use as a mode of transportation.

✓ They are used as a mode of transportation.

The fragment 'use to MO I they use' is ungrammatical. To express that bikes function as transportation in general, use the passive 'are used' or the active 'people use them as a mode of transportation.' Avoid 'used to' which indicates past habitual actions. Suggestion: choose correct active or passive structure and avoid incorrect insertions.

× Also many of kids and children play bike at a recreational park.

✓ Also, many kids and children ride bikes at recreational parks.

The phrase 'many of kids' is incorrect; use 'many kids' or 'many of the kids.' 'Play bike' is incorrect collocation; the correct verb is 'ride' and the noun should be plural 'bikes.' Use plural 'recreational parks' if speaking generally. Suggestion: use appropriate quantifier forms and correct verb-noun collocations (ride bikes).