Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent, concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (use 'ride' not 'write', avoid repetition) and use natural phrasing (e.g., 'My father taught me').

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it, and I learned when I was about seven. Since then I have enjoyed cycling for fun and short trips.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid filler sounds and singular/plural errors. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'roads are designed for motor vehicles').

Example: Not really. Although some people cycle for leisure, most roads in my country are designed for motor vehicles like buses, motorcycles and cars, so cycling is less common and often inconvenient.

× And who taught? Who taught me to write to ride a bike is my father.

✓ Who taught me to ride a bike was my father.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Who taught?' is unnecessary and 'to write to ride a bike' mixes infinitives and an unintended verb 'write'. Use the past tense 'was' to match 'taught' and a single correct infinitive 'to ride'. Improve by removing the extra question and placing the subject before the verb: 'Who taught me to ride a bike was my father.' Note: A more natural answer would be 'My father taught me to ride a bike.'

× I can Rd. I can I can ride a bike.

✓ I can ride a bike.

This sentence contains repetition and a typographical error 'Rd.' Use the present ability modal 'can' once with the base verb 'ride'. Remove duplicates and typos: 'I can ride a bike.'

× Uh, not really, because our country, uh, uh, our roads is made for the transportation such as bars, motorcycle or a car.

✓ Uh, not really, because in our country our roads are made for transportation such as buses, motorcycles, or cars.

There are several errors: 'our roads is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement (plural subject 'roads' needs plural verb 'are'). 'Made for the transportation' is awkward; use 'made for transportation'. 'Bars' is likely a mispronunciation of 'buses'; use the correct plural forms 'buses', 'motorcycles', 'cars'. Also remove extra filler words and correct article usage: no article before 'transportation'.