Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and natural tense usage; make the response slightly longer with one supporting detail using a linking word. Use past simple consistently and vary vocabulary (e.g., "rode" instead of "ride").

Example: Yes, I used to have a bicycle. I rode it home from school almost every day, and my parents bought it for me when I was eight, so it became my favorite way to get around.

Suggestion: Clarify ideas and correct grammar, word choice and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "for example", "in addition"). Use correct nouns and verbs (e.g., "bicycles are", "an app called Wheel"). Avoid redundancy and keep under five sentences.

Example: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many children learn to ride one at an early age. For example, in Bangkok there is an app called Wheel that lets you rent bikes by the hour, which makes cycling around the city convenient and more environmentally friendly.

× I always ride it after school and my parents bought it for me.

✓ I always rode it after school and my parents bought it for me.

The response refers to childhood (past time), so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Ride' is present tense; use 'rode' to match 'bought' and the time frame. Suggestion: use past tense consistently when describing past habits (e.g., "I always rode it after school").

× Yes, as bicycle is a first step for every student to start to learn how to ride.

✓ Yes, a bicycle is the first step for every student to learn how to ride.

Article use is incorrect. 'Bicycle' needs an article; use 'a bicycle'. Also 'first step' as a general concept should take the definite article 'the' ('the first step'). 'Start to learn' is redundant; 'to learn' is sufficient. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns when speaking generally and 'the' for specific roles like 'the first step'.

× And if you live in Bangkok, they have any Wheel which is an application that provide a bike for you to rent and ride around the city which is more convenient and ecoflu.

✓ And in Bangkok, there is an app called Wheel that provides bikes for you to rent and ride around the city; it is more convenient and eco-friendly.

Multiple issues with pronouns and related words: 'they have any Wheel' is incorrect pronoun and determiner usage. Use 'there is' for existence and introduce the app with 'an app called Wheel'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'app'. 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' when referring to general availability. 'Ecoflu' is not a word; use 'eco-friendly'. Also rewrite to improve clarity and sentence flow. Suggestion: use 'there is' to introduce something's existence, match verb number to subject, use correct determiners ('an app'), and use established adjectives like 'eco-friendly'.