Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be careful with grammar (tense, subject-verb agreement) and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases (e.g., "in tomorrow").

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my father was worried about my safety. Therefore, he wouldn't let me ride one. Instead, I usually walked to school, and I enjoyed it because the air was fresh and I could chat with my friends along the way.

Suggestion: Improve accuracy and coherence: use correct nouns and plural forms, and add a linking phrase to explain reasons clearly. Provide a specific example or comparison (e.g., commute time) to strengthen your answer.

Example: Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because traffic is often heavy. As a result, cycling can be faster than driving for short trips. For example, during rush hour I can reach my office by bike in 20 minutes, while a car might take 45 minutes.

× that's why he don't let me have one.

✓ that's why he didn't let me have one.

The speaker refers to a past situation, so the auxiliary should be in past tense. 'Don't' is present tense and incorrect with singular third person in past context. Use 'didn't' to match past time frame. Suggestion: use 'didn't' for negative past actions (he didn't let me).

× He usually walk to school and I really like to walk to school because there was fresh air in tomorrow.

✓ He usually walked to school, and I really liked walking to school because there was fresh air in the morning.

Multiple issues: 'usually' with past narrative requires past tense 'walked' (third person singular in past uses base verb with past ending). 'I really like' should match past narrative 'I really liked'. 'Walk to school' repeated is stylistically improved by 'walking to school'. 'There was fresh air in tomorrow' is incorrect reference to time and word choice; 'tomorrow' is wrong for past context and 'in the morning' fits. Use past tense consistently and correct time expression. (Grammar problem types: 2 Third person singular issue; 6 Present tense issue; 5 Past tense issue; 11 Incorrect use of prepositions.)

× Yes, bike is popular in my country because there are more traffic in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because there is more traffic in our country.

'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. Use plural subject with 'are'. 'Traffic' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is' rather than 'are'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct count noun/plural usage. (Grammar problem types: 1 Singular and plural issue; 27 Subject-verb agreement errors.)

× That's why the work is much easier on bike rather than car which save our time.

✓ That's why travelling by bike is much easier than by car, which saves us time.

Use comparative structure 'easier than' not 'easier on... rather than'. Include gerund 'travelling' or phrase 'by bike' and parallel structure 'by car'. 'Car' needs article or preposition 'by car'. 'Save' should be 'saves' to agree with singular relative pronoun 'which' referring to the situation; also use 'us' instead of 'our time' or 'saves us time.' (Grammar problem types: 25 Comparative and superlative errors; 27 Subject-verb agreement errors; 11 Incorrect use of prepositions.)