Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and pronouns (e.g., "I didn't have a bike"; "my cousin had a bike"). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

Example: No, I didn't have my own bike when I was a child. However, my cousin had one, so I often practised riding it at her house on weekends. Because of those practice sessions, I became quite confident riding on quiet roads.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and provide a supporting reason with a linking word and a specific example. Use more natural phrasing like "gasoline prices have risen" and add one specific detail about who uses bikes and where. Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

Example: Yes, bikes are becoming very popular in my country because gasoline prices have risen significantly. For example, many commuters now cycle to work in cities to save money and avoid traffic, especially on short journeys.

× I don't have but my cousin have a bike before so I will practice using her bike.

✓ I didn't have one, but my cousin had a bike before, so I practiced using her bike.

Errors: 'I don't have' is present tense while the question asks about childhood past; use past tense 'I didn't have' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue and ID 5: Past tense issue). 'my cousin have' is subject-verb agreement in past; use 'my cousin had' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors and ID 5: Past tense issue). 'before' with 'will practice' is inconsistent; the action refers to the past, so use past 'practiced' (Grammar Problem Type ID 7: Future tense issue when misused). Combined correction: change present/future verbs to simple past to match the time frame. Suggestion: identify the time reference words (when you were a child, before) and use past tense consistently; ensure subject-verb agreement for singular subjects (cousin -> had).

× Nowadays bikes are so popular in our country because of gasoline hike.

✓ Nowadays, bikes are very popular in our country because of the rise in gasoline prices.

Errors: 'Nowadays bikes' needs a comma after 'Nowadays' and 'bikes' is fine but style: use 'very popular' rather than 'so popular' for formality (Grammar Problem Type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'gasoline hike' is ungrammatical; use 'the rise in gasoline prices' or 'the gasoline price hike' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and ID 22: Article errors). Also add 'the' before the specific rise. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('rise in prices' or 'price hike') and include articles where needed; add comma after introductory adverbial 'Nowadays'. Here the tense is present and matches 'nowadays' so keep present simple.