Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, grammatical and add a short reason or brief detail. Use one clear topic sentence then one supporting detail. Connect ideas with a short linking word (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid sentence fragments.

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and we had limited space for storing one. As a result, I rarely had the chance to learn to ride.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use correct verb forms and complete sentences. Mention one or two concrete reasons why bikes are popular and avoid vague phrases.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap to maintain and help people avoid traffic. For example, many city residents cycle to work during rush hour, and there are more bike lanes now which makes cycling safer.

× In my childhood.

✓ When I was a child.

This fragment is incomplete and does not form a full sentence. Use a time clause 'When I was a child' to indicate the period; it can attach to a main clause (e.g. 'When I was a child, I did not ride a bike'). Suggestion: combine this clause with a verb and subject to make a complete sentence.

× I didn't ride a bike better.

✓ I couldn't ride a bike well.

The student used 'didn't ride ... better' which is unidiomatic and mixes comparative 'better' with a negative past simple. Use 'couldn't' to express inability in the past and 'well' (an adverb) to modify the verb. Suggestion: use 'couldn't ride a bike well' or 'I wasn't able to ride a bike well.'

× Yes, I singed by ride a bike is very great transportation for everyone's.

✓ Yes, I think riding a bike is a great form of transportation for everyone.

This sentence has multiple problems: 'singed' is likely a misspelling of 'think'; 'by ride' attempts to form a gerund incorrectly; 'very great' is non-idiomatic and should be 'a great'; 'for everyone's' misuses possessive and plural. According to the allowed list, apply sentence structure correction and adjective/adverb choices. Suggestion: use 'I think riding a bike is a great form of transportation for everyone.'

× I think the bikes are popular in my country is nowadays because it's not only can bring fresh air but also can.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country nowadays because they not only promote fresh air but also have other benefits.

The original wrongly duplicates 'is' and misorders modal/can ('it's not only can bring'). Subject-verb and tense need correction: use present simple 'are popular' and adverb 'nowadays' after the subject. Replace 'it's not only can bring fresh air but also can' with a parallel structure: 'they not only ... but also ...'. Suggestion: 'I think bikes are popular in my country nowadays because they not only bring fresh air but also provide other benefits.'