Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
I think no, because in my country people always use cars.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 你应该直接回答问题并给出具体细节,而不是重复考官的问题。回答要自然、简短(不超过5句),并可以补充1–2个支持性细节,使用连接词使表达连贯。比如说明是否有自行车、什么时候拥有、如何使用以及你的感受或一两个例子。
Example: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it to school almost every day. Although it was small and rusty, it gave me a lot of freedom and I spent weekends exploring the neighborhood with friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答时应更直接并使用连接词来支撑你的观点,同时提供具体原因或例子。避免简单否定,改用完整句并给出一至两条具体原因(如城市规划、交通习惯或气候),使答案更自然且信息量更大。
Example: Not really. Most people prefer cars because public transport is limited and cities are designed for driving. As a result, cycling is more common only in parks or among fitness enthusiasts.
× Did you have a bike when you were a child?
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.
学生重复考官的问题作为回答,导致句子结构不完整且不符合回答预期。应直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”,然后补充具体信息。本例使用过去时(had)描述过去拥有,结构为:肯定回答 + 解释(I had a bike when I was a child)。建议练习用简短直接的答句并跟随一两个描述性从句。
× I think no, because in my country people always use cars.
✓ I don't think so, because people in my country usually use cars.
原句“I think no”不是地道表达,句子结构不自然。更自然的否定表达是“I don't think so”。此外,always 表示“总是”过于绝对,改为 usually 更符合事实陈述。还建议将“in my country”放在“people”前或保持原位,但更自然顺序为“people in my country”。因此改为“I don't think so, because people in my country usually use cars.”