Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is direct but too short and lacks detail. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike it was, who gave it to you, or a memory involving it). Use a linking word if you add more than one detail. Keep it natural and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight years old. It was a small red mountain bike that my parents bought me for my birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon with my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer gives a reason but has grammar and clarity issues and is somewhat repetitive. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and more specific supporting details (for example: who uses bikes, in which cities, and why). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many commuters choose bicycles because they are cheap and help avoid traffic, so cycling has become a common way to get to work.

× Yeah, it is popular because there are many people use this bike to go to work everywhere they want to go.

✓ Yeah, they are popular because many people use bikes to go to work everywhere they want to go.

The original sentence has multiple issues that match subject-verb agreement and related errors. 'It is popular' uses singular pronoun 'it' but refers to 'bikes' (plural), so subject and verb must agree; change to 'they are popular.' Also 'there are many people use this bike' is ungrammatical: when stating that many people perform an action, use 'many people use bikes' (no 'there are' plus finite clause). Additionally, 'this bike' is singular while speaking generally about bikes; use the plural 'bikes.' To improve, identify the true subject (bikes/many people) and ensure verbs and pronouns agree in number and use the correct sentence pattern: 'They are popular because many people use bikes to go to work.'