Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, vocabulary and clarity. Use past tense for childhood, correct family term and verbs, and be concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. For example, say when you received it and who taught you. Avoid unrelated words (e.g., “write”) and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My great-grandfather gave it to me when I was seven and he taught me how to ride it in the park near our house.

Suggestion: Be more organized and specific. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give 1–2 concrete reasons using linking words (for example, because, so, and). Correct plural and article use (children, bikes). Mention where and why people ride bikes (commuting, exercise, leisure). Keep answers to under five sentences and avoid repetition or filler sounds.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, children often ride bikes to school or to the park, and adults use them for commuting in busy city areas.

× I do have a bike and my grand grandfather teach me how to write it.

✓ I had a bike and my great-grandfather taught me how to ride it.

Multiple issues: pronoun/tense and word choice. The question asked about childhood, so past tense is required (Present tense 'do have' and 'teach' are incorrect) — this is a Past tense issue (ID 5) and Subject-verb agreement for past (ID 27) but classified here as Incorrect use of pronouns/word choice. Also 'grand grandfather' is incorrect; use 'great-grandfather'. 'Write' is the wrong verb; context is riding a bike, so use 'ride'. Correction uses simple past 'had' and 'taught' to match the time frame. Suggestion: When referring to past events, use past tense verbs (had, taught) and choose the correct vocabulary (ride a bike).

× Yeah, bikes are bikes are popular in our country because most of child, uh, they are my friends.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because most children, including my friends, use them.

Issues: repetition ('bikes are bikes are'), incorrect noun form 'child' instead of plural 'children' (Singular and plural issue ID 1), redundant pronoun 'they' and unclear structure. The correction removes repetition, uses plural 'children', and restructures the sentence for clarity. Suggestion: Avoid repeating words, ensure correct plural forms for countable nouns, and combine clauses smoothly (e.g., 'most children use them' or 'most children, including my friends, use them').

× They are using bike and we are always riding it.

✓ They use bikes and we always ride them.

Problems: incorrect continuous tense choice for habitual action (use simple present instead of present continuous — Present tense issue ID 6), singular/plural mismatch ('bike' vs 'bikes') and pronoun/antecedent agreement ('it' should be 'them' for plural). The correction uses simple present 'use' and 'ride' for habitual actions and plural forms for consistency. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits ('they use', 'we ride') and ensure pronouns agree in number with their nouns ('them' for bikes).

× They are going to go travel there, there.

✓ They often go travelling there.

Problems: awkward future construction 'are going to go travel' and repeated 'there, there' (redundancy and incorrect verb form). For habitual or frequent trips, use simple present 'often go' or present progressive for planned near future. Also use the correct verb form 'travel' or 'go travelling'; British English often uses 'go travelling'. Suggestion: Use concise expressions for repeated actions ('they often go travelling there') and avoid redundant words.