Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Content and coherence: Your answer addresses the question but has multiple grammar errors and repeats phrases ("my mom and dad" twice). It also includes a likely typo/confusion "bag" instead of "bike." To improve, give a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, avoid repetition, and add a brief supporting detail (reason or feeling). Use linking words if you add extra information. Keep it within 2–4 concise sentences. Specific actions: 1) Use past simple: "I didn't have a bike." 2) Avoid repetition by rephrasing: "neither of my parents bought me one." 3) Clarify any typos ("bike" not "bag"). 4) Add one supporting detail: a reason or how you felt about it. 5) Limit to under five sentences.

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents never bought one for me. As a result, I learned to get around on foot or by public transport, which was fine but I sometimes felt jealous when friends rode their bikes. Now I have one and enjoy cycling on weekends.

Suggestion: Content and coherence: Your answer gives a clear opinion and relevant reasons (exercise and transport) but has awkward phrasing, grammatical mistakes, and vague specifics ("K5 kilometer"). To improve, state your main idea in one clear sentence, use linking words to add reasons, give a specific and natural example (distances, places, or groups), and correct grammar (use plural/verb forms). Keep it concise and avoid repetition. Specific actions: 1) Use a clear topic sentence: "Yes, bikes are popular." 2) Use linking words: "because" or "since" and "for example." 3) Replace unclear terms like "K5 kilometer" with a realistic distance or phrase like "a few kilometers." 4) Vary vocabulary: "cycling" instead of repeating "bike." 5) Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people cycle for exercise and short trips. For example, commuters often bike a few kilometers to work or students ride to school, and weekend cycling clubs regularly cover 10–20 km together.

× When I was a child I don't have a bike and my mom and dad, even my mom and dad didn't bought me a bike or teach me how to bike so I don't have a bag at all.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike, and my mom and dad didn't buy me a bike or teach me how to ride one, so I didn't have a bike at all.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'When I was a child' sets the past context, so verbs should be in the past tense. Use 'didn't have' not 'don't have', and the base form 'buy' after 'didn't' rather than 'bought'. Also use 'ride' instead of 'bike' as a verb and correct 'bag' to 'bike'. Suggestions: keep all main verbs in simple past for consistency, use base verb after 'didn't', and choose correct verb vocabulary (ride a bike).

× Of course, I think bikes are popular in my country 'cause many bikers are using this as a kind of exercise.

✓ Of course, I think bikes are popular in my country because many cyclists use them as a form of exercise.

The phrase 'are using this' is awkward; after general time expressions (present habitual) use simple present: 'cyclists use them'. Also 'bikers' can mean motorcyclists, so 'cyclists' is clearer. Replace informal 'cause' with 'because' and 'a kind of' with 'a form of'. Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'bikes'.

× They bike up almost K5 kilometer or more and this bike is a kind of exercise also and transportation for.

✓ They cycle nearly 5 kilometers or more, and bikes are also a form of exercise and a means of transportation.

Use simple present for habitual actions: 'They cycle'. Use 'nearly 5 kilometers' for correct quantity expression and plural 'kilometers'. 'This bike is a kind of exercise' is incorrect: a bike is not exercise, cycling is; rephrase to 'bikes are a form of exercise and a means of transportation.' Also correct word order and article use. Suggestions: use correct verb 'cycle', correct plural measurement, and clearer nouns 'form of exercise' and 'means of transportation'.