Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did.), correct verb forms and pronouns, avoid redundant connectors (but however), and give one or two brief supporting details using linking words (because/so). Limit to 2–4 sentences. For example, say why you stopped using it and when that happened.

Example: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I stopped using it after I fell several times and damaged it, so my parents decided to put it away. Now I rarely ride because I mainly use public transport.

Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing. Begin with a direct opinion sentence, then give a specific reason using linking words (for example/because). Correct grammar for age or licensing rules (under the legal driving age). Keep it concise and include a brief example or comparison if helpful.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially among school students. This is because many children are under the legal driving age, so they cycle to school instead of driving motorbikes. For example, I often saw groups of pupils riding small bicycles to class.

× Oh yes, I did have a bike when I were a child but however for when I have fallen a lot so I put it away and don't use it anymore.

✓ Oh yes, I did have a bike when I was a child, but I fell off it a lot, so I put it away and don't use it anymore.

The sentence contains incorrect past tense forms and mixed tenses. 'Were' should be 'was' for the singular first person past (past tense issue). 'For when I have fallen a lot' mixes present perfect with past narrative; use simple past 'I fell off it a lot' to match 'did have' and the rest of the past narrative. Also remove redundant connectors 'but however' and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when describing past events (use 'was' and 'fell').

× I think bikes is very popular in my country, especially for students to go to school because they was under the age limit to to dry to drive a bike, a motorbike.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially for students who go to school because they are below the age limit to drive a motorbike.

Several agreement and related errors: 'bikes is' should be 'bikes are' (plural subject requires plural verb). 'they was' should be 'they are' or 'they were' depending on time; here present general fact uses present 'they are'. The phrase 'under the age limit to to dry to drive' has word choice and repetition errors: use 'below the age limit to drive' and 'motorbike' is the correct noun. Also change 'for students to go to school' to 'for students who go to school' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and keep consistent tense for general facts (present simple).