Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, thì và sự mạch lạc; trả lời trực tiếp hơn với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa lỗi từ và câu không hợp lý, và thêm chi tiết cụ thể liên quan (ví dụ: tuổi, hoạt động khi đi xe). Hạn chế tối đa số câu (không quá 5 câu) và dùng liên từ phù hợp để nối ý.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a pink bicycle when I was seven, and I loved riding it every afternoon. I often rode around the park near my school with my friends, which helped me become more confident and independent. Overall, it was one of my favorite childhood memories.

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, động từ và cấu trúc câu; trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ 'use it' -> 'use them' hoặc 'use bicycles'), và liệt kê các hoạt động một cách tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips such as commuting to work, going to school, or shopping at the local market. In big cities, bicycles are also common because they are cheap and convenient, especially during rush hour. Therefore, cycling remains an important part of daily life for many people.

× It was pink and I really love it.

✓ It was pink and I really loved it.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. The context is about childhood, so past tense should be used for both verbs. Change 'love' to 'loved' to match 'was' and indicate the feeling occurred in the past.

× I usually buy kit UMM in the park after my school.

✓ I usually rode my bike in the park after school.

The student uses present tense 'buy' and an unclear phrase 'kit UMM'. The question asks about childhood habits, so past habit should be expressed with 'used to' or past simple 'rode'. Also 'after my school' is incorrect; use 'after school'. Suggestion: use 'I used to ride my bike in the park after school.' if emphasizing past habitual action.

× People always use it in daily activity like go to walk, go to work and go to school, go to the market or. Do.

✓ People always use them in daily activities, like going for a walk, going to work, going to school, or going to the market.

Several issues: 'people' is plural, so the pronoun referring to bikes should be plural 'them' (subject-verb agreement/pronoun agreement). 'daily activity' should be plural 'daily activities'. The list items need gerunds after 'like' ('going'), and the sentence end 'or. Do.' is incorrect and must be removed. Also consistency of verb forms and punctuation improved.