Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify tense and grammar, use a clear topic sentence, reduce filler words, and add one specific supporting detail. Use correct possessives and plural forms. Keep to 2–3 sentences and connect ideas with a linking word.

Example: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. Instead, I often used my brother’s small, comfortable bike because it was easy for me to ride around the neighborhood.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion, avoid fillers, use correct verb forms, and finish the sentence with a specific reason or example. Use linking words like “because” or “however” to connect ideas. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

Example: In my opinion, bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer public transport or private cars. For example, cities have good bus and subway networks, so many people find them more convenient than cycling.

× 'Well, I have uh, I have not bike, but my brother have bike had bike and I I use him bikes because umm my brother bikes is very comfort and the small.'

✓ 'Well, I did not have a bike, but my brother had one and I used his bike because my brother's bike was very comfortable and small.'

'Multiple subject-verb agreement and tense errors: use past tense because the question asks about childhood (use did not have, had, used). Replace "have not bike" with "did not have a bike" (correct negative in past). Change "my brother have bike had bike" to "my brother had one" (singular and past). "I use him bikes" should be "I used his bike" (past tense and correct possessive pronoun his, singular bike). "my brother bikes is" should be "my brother's bike was" (possessive form and past singular verb). "very comfort" should be "very comfortable" (adjective form). Suggestion: identify the required tense from the question (past), ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct possessive pronouns and adjective forms.'

× 'From my perspective, uh, bikes are not popular in my country because umm, almost all individuals using uh, public transport or own car, uh, because uh, these transfers are.'

✓ 'From my perspective, bikes are not popular in my country because almost everyone uses public transport or owns a car, because these modes of transport are more convenient.'

'Present tense and subject-verb agreement issues: use simple present for general statements (use uses, owns). "Almost all individuals using" is incorrect; use "almost everyone uses". "Own car" should be "owns a car" (verb agreement and article). "These transfers are" is unclear; replace with "these modes of transport are more convenient" to complete the sentence and use correct noun phrase. Suggestion: use simple present for general facts, ensure verbs agree with singular/collective subjects, include appropriate articles and finish comparative clause for clarity.'