Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve accuracy, coherence and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and pronouns, avoid redundancy, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words (for example, 'because' and 'so') correctly and give a concise specific detail (who you borrowed from, how often).

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I often borrowed my best friend’s bike at weekends so I could ride around the neighborhood.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary and grammar, and make your reasons specific and coherent. Begin with a direct answer, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Avoid unclear words and repetitions; use 'bike' not 'BITE' and say 'public transport' or 'buses'.

Example: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because roads are often crowded and many people prefer public transport like buses. However, some people use bikes for short trips in quieter neighborhoods.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because it was very expensive and we don't have enough space in our house, so I would like to borrow my friends.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because it was very expensive and we didn't have enough space in our house, so I used to borrow my friends' bikes.

Mixing past and present tenses: the sentence begins in past ('I didn't have') but then shifts to present ('we don't have') and uses 'would like to' which expresses a present desire. Consistency requires past tense throughout since the context is childhood. Also, 'borrow my friends' is incomplete; you borrow something from friends. Use 'used to borrow' to indicate habitual past action and 'friends' bikes' to show the object borrowed. Suggestion: maintain past tense for events in childhood and use correct possessive form for the borrowed items.

× I don't think BITE is very popular in my country because the road is very crowded and people are usually go to school or go to work by bus or transport others other transport.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the roads are very crowded and people usually go to school or to work by bus or other forms of transport.

Several issues: 'BITE' is likely a typo for 'bike' and should be lowercase 'bikes' (plural). 'Road' should be plural 'roads' when speaking generally. 'People are usually go' is ungrammatical; remove 'are' and use 'people usually go'. 'Go to school or to work' requires parallel structure. 'By bus or transport others other transport' is unclear and ungrammatical; replace with 'by bus or other forms of transport.' Suggestion: correct typos, use plural nouns for general statements, ensure subject-verb structure is correct, and use parallel phrasing for coordinated actions.