Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự câu, dùng thì phù hợp và từ vựng chính xác; trả lời trực tiếp rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể; tránh thông tin mơ hồ và lỗi từ (ví dụ: 'write' sai phải là 'ride'). Cố gắng giữ tối đa 3-4 câu tự nhiên.

Example: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a small pink bicycle when I was six, and I practised riding it every afternoon in our courtyard. It helped me become more confident and independent.

Suggestion: Cải thiện tổ chức câu và ngữ pháp (chủ ngữ-động từ, mạo từ, số nhiều), dùng liên từ hợp lý và từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'cheap' thay cho 'thrift'); đưa ra lý do cụ thể và một dẫn chứng ngắn; giới hạn 3-4 câu rõ ràng.

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people commute to work or school by bike because it is cheap and convenient, and it helps them avoid traffic jams. For example, I often see busy streets full of cyclists during rush hour.

× Looking back when I was a child, I have my own bike which has the color pink and my mom bought it for me, so I obtained practice to learn how to write it every afternoon when I was young.

✓ Looking back to when I was a child, I had my own pink bike that my mom bought for me, so I practiced riding it every afternoon when I was young.

The student mixes present and past tenses. Use past tense 'had' and 'bought' for past situations. 'Have' should be 'had' (present tense issue). 'Has the color pink' is awkward; use 'pink bike'. 'Obtained practice to learn how to write it' is incorrect verb choice and meaning; use 'practiced riding it'. Suggestions: keep consistent past tense for childhood events, use natural collocations ("had a pink bike", "practiced riding").

× I think yes because but in my opinion bike are one of the most popular behind school in my country.

✓ I think so because, in my opinion, bikes are one of the most popular means of transport for students in my country.

Several issues: 'I think yes because but' is ungrammatical and redundant; use 'I think so because' or 'In my opinion'. 'Bike are' shows subject-verb agreement error; 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match verb 'are' or verb should be 'is' for singular — here plural is appropriate. 'behind school' is unclear and likely wrong preposition/phrase; clarify as 'for students' or 'among students'. Suggestions: fix word order, ensure subject and verb agree, and choose correct prepositions/phrasing for meaning.

× For example I can see many people use bike to go to work or go to school.

✓ For example, I can see many people using bikes to go to work or to school.

The original uses bare infinitive 'use' after 'see' where a gerund or present participle ('using') is more natural when describing habits. Also 'bike' should be plural 'bikes'. Suggestions: after 'see' to describe general observation, use 'people using' or say 'many people use bikes' with consistent plural form.

× Umm it's because it's convenient and thrift and also it also avoid the traffic congestion.

✓ Umm, it's because it's convenient and cheap, and it also helps avoid traffic congestion.

'Thrift' is a noun meaning frugality and is incorrect here; the adjective 'cheap' or 'inexpensive' is appropriate. 'It also avoid' has a subject-verb agreement/missing helper: use 'it also helps avoid' or 'it also avoids' (but 'helps avoid' is more natural). Suggestions: choose correct adjective forms and include appropriate verbs ('helps avoid').