Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g. "learn to ride" instead of "learn it", "useful for later in life" instead of "for the future life", avoid vague phrase "transmission tools"). Keep answers concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

Example: Yes, I did. My parents encouraged me to learn to ride a bike when I was about six, because they thought it would be a useful skill later in life. For example, I used to cycle to school and visit friends, which helped me become more independent.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid hesitation fillers. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes/No/Somewhat) and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct expressions ("suitable for people of all ages", "help them keep fit"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to organize your points and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and suitable for people of all ages. For example, many families use bicycles for short trips and exercise, and elderly people often cycle in parks to keep fit.

× Actually yes, because my parents told me I have to learn it.

✓ Actually yes, because my parents told me I had to learn it.

The sentence refers to a past event ('my parents told me'), so the reported clause should use past tense 'had to' rather than present 'have to'. This is a tense sequence (backshifting) issue; change 'have to' to 'had to' to match past reference. Suggestion: Use past tense in subordinate clauses after past reporting verbs (told, said).

× I could learn it for the future life.

✓ I could learn it for my future life.

The phrase 'for the future life' is unidiomatic and lacks possession. Adding 'my' makes it clear whose future is meant: 'for my future life'. Additionally, consider using 'for the future' or 'for my future' which are more natural. Suggestion: Use 'for my future' or 'for the future' and avoid literal translation 'future life'.

× That is a good transmission tools.

✓ That is a good transmission tool.

There is a number mismatch: singular 'That is' requires singular noun 'tool', not plural 'tools'. Change 'tools' to 'tool' or change the verb to plural ('Those are') if you mean multiple tools. Suggestion: Match singular/plural between subject and noun: 'That is a good ... tool' or 'Those are good ... tools'.

× Actually, I asked because, uh, it's very suitable for every an aged person and that's, it's a good way to help them to understand more about the keep fit and, uh.

✓ Actually, I asked because it's very suitable for every aged person, and it's a good way to help them understand more about keeping fit.

Multiple issues combined: unneeded filler words removed, incorrect article 'an' before 'aged person' should be omitted with 'every' ('every aged person' is still awkward; 'every older person' or 'older people' is better), redundant comma splice fixed, incorrect infinitive 'to understand more about the keep fit' corrected to gerund phrase 'understand more about keeping fit', and remove extra 'to' after 'help' (help + bare infinitive or help + to-infinitive; 'help them understand' is natural). Suggestion: Use 'older people' or 'every older person', avoid filler 'uh', use 'help them understand more about keeping fit' or 'help them to keep fit'.