Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, dùng thì quá khứ vì hỏi về quá khứ. Tránh lẫn lộn từ vựng (ví dụ “achieve” không phù hợp). Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên, có câu chủ đề và một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ, dùng liên từ nếu cần.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to visit my friends near my house. It was a simple bike but I loved it because it made me feel independent.

Suggestion: Câu hỏi yêu cầu ý kiến; cần trả lời trực tiếp và dùng cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “buy a proper”. Trả lời nên bao gồm lý do cụ thể và ví dụ, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g., “because”, “for example”).

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see students and office workers cycling to work, and there are also bike-sharing programs in some areas.

× Did you have a bike when you will achieve?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used a future tense phrase 'will achieve' incorrectly in a question about past possession. The examiner's original asks about childhood (past), so the correct time reference is past simple 'were'. Suggestion: use past time expressions (e.g., 'when you were a child') or past simple verbs to match past context.

× Do you think buy a proper in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's sentence is ungrammatical: it lacks a subject for the verb 'buy' and uses 'proper' incorrectly as a noun. The examiner's question asks about popularity, so the correct response should mirror that structure. Suggestion: use a full clause after 'Do you think' (e.g., 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?') or rephrase with a proper noun phrase (e.g., 'Do you think people buy bikes in your country?').