Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, tense consistency and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct common mistakes: use past tense (“had”, “was a child”, “couldn’t ride”, “my mom taught me”) and avoid repetition. Keep answer under five sentences and make details specific (where, how long, whether you succeeded).

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. At first I couldn’t ride it, so my mother taught me step by step in the park over several afternoons. After a few days of practice I could ride confidently without training wheels.

Suggestion: Work on fluency and clarity: avoid filler words (umm) and correct grammar and word choice. Begin with a clear opinion, then use linking words (however, because) to give specific reasons and examples. Use correct noun forms and prepositions ("bicycles are popular as exercise"; "the landscape in Taiwan is very hilly"). Keep it concise and factual.

Example: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country as a form of exercise and leisure. However, many people find cycling difficult in Taiwan because the terrain is very hilly, so cyclists often choose coastal or flat urban routes instead.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a children and I remember I have an experiment experience of that because I cannot ride a bike at the first time, my mom just teach me a step by step.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I remember I had an experimental experience with it because I could not ride a bike at first; my mom just taught me step by step.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'do have' is present tense but context is past, so use 'had' (present tense issue). 'a children' is plural noun with singular article—should be 'a child' (singular/plural issue). 'I remember I have an experiment experience of that' is awkward and incorrect: use past 'I had an experimental experience with it' and correct noun/adjective forms (incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and verb forms). 'cannot ride a bike at the first time' should be 'could not ride a bike at first' (past ability/tense issue). 'my mom just teach me a step by step' needs past tense 'taught' and smoother phrase 'taught me step by step' (past tense issue and article/word order). Suggestions: keep past tense consistently when talking about childhood; use correct noun number ('child' not 'children'); use 'could' for past ability; use 'taught' as past of 'teach'; prefer concise, natural phrasing such as the corrected sentence.

× Yes, I think bike is a kind of umm, popular exercising my country, but umm because of love I I landscape, the landscape of Taiwan is really umm steep to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are a popular form of exercise in my country, but because of the landscape — I love the scenery — Taiwan is quite steep in many places, which makes it difficult to ride a bike.

Several issues: 'bike is a kind of... popular exercising my country' mixes countable noun and noun forms; use plural 'bicycles' and noun phrase 'a popular form of exercise' (singular/plural issue and incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'because of love I I landscape' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'because I love the landscape' (incorrect word order and pronoun placement). 'the landscape of Taiwan is really umm steep to ride a bike' should be rephrased 'Taiwan is quite steep in many places, which makes it difficult to ride a bike' to express cause and result (sentence structure errors and incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestions: use plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally, use 'form of exercise' for activity, maintain logical word order ('I love the landscape'), and link clauses to show cause and effect.