Bike— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
I, I had a bag when I was a child and, uh, when I was around two or three and I learned to read it every day, but when I was around 4, it was stolen. So I, so my parents bought me another pack.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
I think it's because it's more cheaper than than the cars and you can save money for the fuels and also, uh, because you can, it's more convenient. You can ride on it and reach to any place you want.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 42.0Suggestion: Be direct and relevant to the question (bike). Start with a clear topic sentence answering yes/no, then add 1–2 concise supporting details. Avoid hesitations, repetitions and irrelevant words (you mentioned a bag instead of a bike). Use linking words like “but” or “so” correctly and keep sentences short (maximum 5).
Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I started riding it at about four years old, and I used it every day to go to the park. However, it was stolen when I was six, so my parents bought me a new one the following week.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: Begin with a clear opinion sentence (Yes/No or I think so). Provide two specific reasons with brief supporting details and use linking words (for example, “because”, “so”, “therefore”). Avoid grammar errors (e.g., “more cheaper”, “for the fuels”) and fillers. Keep answers concise and natural (no more than 5 sentences).
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheaper than cars and much more economical to run. For example, people save money on fuel and parking. Moreover, bikes are convenient for short trips in busy cities, so many commuters prefer them.
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