Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is correct and natural but too brief. Add one or two short supporting details (where you rode it, how often, or a memory) using a linking word to make it more complete while keeping it concise.

Example: Yes, I did. I rode it almost every weekend around my neighborhood, and it was my main way to play with friends when I was small.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has repetition, unclear words (e.g., “MRTLRT”), and long unstructured phrasing. Improve clarity by using a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting points, and linking words. Avoid repetition and replace unclear abbreviations with full words or simpler terms.

Example: Yes, bikes are fairly popular, but mainly for leisure. For example, many people cycle in parks or within the UMM residential area; however, most commuters use cars or trains because the roads and cycle lanes are not well planned compared with places like Singapore.

× Yes I think so, but mostly we just ride our bike in the park or around the UMM residential area because most most of us we travel by car or train MRTLRT and the road is not well planned for bike users like Singapore.

✓ Yes, I think so, but mostly we just ride our bikes in the park or around the UMM residential area because most of us travel by car or train, and the roads are not well planned for bike users like in Singapore.

Multiple issues are involved but limited to those in the provided list: 1) Singular and plural issue: 'ride our bike' should be 'ride our bikes' because 'our' refers to multiple people, so the noun must be plural. 2) Sentence structure/extra words: remove the repeated 'most' and the extra pronoun 'we' after 'most of us' to make the sentence grammatically correct. 3) Incorrect use of prepositions/word choice (covered by list item 11): add 'in' before 'Singapore' for correct comparison phrasing and change 'the road' to 'the roads' to match general reference to road planning. Suggestions: use plural nouns when the possessive indicates multiple owners (our + noun), eliminate redundant words, and ensure prepositions are included in comparative phrases (like 'in Singapore').