Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và sự mạch lạc: sửa các lỗi thì và cấu trúc (ví dụ 'I did have' nên là 'I had'; 'when I were child' → 'when I was a child'; 'we have to know' → 'we had to learn' hoặc 'I had to learn'). Giảm lặp từ và thêm liên từ để mạch lạc hơn (ví dụ sử dụng 'so' hoặc 'which' để nối ý). Giữ câu ngắn gọn (không quá 3–4 câu) và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về cảm xúc hoặc một kỷ niệm ngắn để làm phong phú nội dung.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it to get to school and run small errands on my own, which made me feel more independent. I remember practicing in the park near our house until I could ride without help.

Suggestion: Sửa phát âm và chính tả, dùng thì và từ vựng chính xác: 'Buys' → 'Bikes'; tránh lặp từ ('bike bikes') và sửa 'move fastly' → 'move quickly' hoặc 'travel faster'. Thêm liên từ để làm rõ lý do và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: công việc bận rộn, giao thông công cộng, xe máy/ô tô). Nên nêu quan điểm rõ ràng rồi giải thích với một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể.

Example: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller towns and among students. However, in large cities many people choose motorcycles or cars because they need to travel faster and cover longer distances, and public transport has also improved.

× I did have a bike when I were child.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child.

Error type: Past tense issue (incorrect past form of 'to be'). Use 'was' for first and third person singular in past simple. Suggestion: use 'was' instead of 'were' in 'when I was a child'.

× Because we have to know how to ride a bicycle to move on the way to go to school, to do anything you like without helping from our parents.

✓ Because we had to know how to ride a bicycle to get to school and do things you wanted without help from our parents.

Error type: Present tense issue and sentence structure problems: the context is past (childhood), so verbs should be past tense ('had', 'wanted'). Also 'to move on the way to go to school' is awkward; use 'to get to school'. 'Helping from our parents' is incorrect collocation; use 'help from our parents'. Suggestion: shift verbs to past tense and simplify phrases for clarity.

× So that's what make me feel mature.

✓ So that's what made me feel mature.

Error type: Subject-verb agreement / past tense. 'That' (singular) requires singular past verb 'made' rather than 'make'. Also context is past, so use past tense. Suggestion: use 'made' to match singular subject and past timeframe.

× Buys are popular in my country, but recently people don't use bike bikes as much as they have because we have to move fastly fast MMM in the big cities.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country, but recently people don't use bikes as much as they used to because we have to move quickly in the big cities.

Error type: Singular and plural issue and adverb/adjective usage. 'Buys' is a misspelling; should be 'Bikes' (plural). Use 'bikes' consistently. 'as much as they have' is incorrect; use 'as they used to' for past habitual. 'Fastly' is incorrect; use adverb 'quickly'. Also remove hesitation 'MMM' and duplicate words. Suggestion: correct spelling, use plural form, use 'used to' for past habits, and use 'quickly' as the adverb.