Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Without a shadow of doubt, I will absolutely say yes. I used have a bike when I was young. My father bought it for me as a birthday gift. When I received this gift I very like it and I always try by by my cycle my bike.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Without a shadow of a doubt, I will absolutely say yes back is very convenient for everyone to use. In the past, there are a companion to develop a share back economy so we can see backs on the road.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 56.0Suggestion: 在回答时要更自然、简洁并注意语法与用词。首先直接回答问题(Yes/No + 简短理由),然后用一到两句具体细节补充。注意时态一致(过去式)、动词拼写和句子结构,避免冗余表达(如“Without a shadow of doubt, I will absolutely say yes”太夸张且重复)。可以用连接词(e.g. because, so)使逻辑更清楚。
Example: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bicycle for my tenth birthday, and I used to ride it to the park almost every day because it was my favorite way to spend time outdoors.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: 回答要更准确、用词要正确并注意语法与时态。直接给出观点并用一到两句支持理由,使用正确名词(bike/bicycle, bike-sharing)和复数形式(bikes)。避免重复和不自然短语,使用连接词(for example, because, so)说明原因或举例。
Example: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular. They are convenient for short trips, and the rise of bike-sharing programs in recent years has made bicycles much more visible on city streets.
× Without a shadow of doubt, I will absolutely say yes. I used have a bike when I was young.
✓ Without a shadow of a doubt, I would absolutely say yes. I used to have a bike when I was young.
错误类型对应:6. Present tense issue 与 5. Past tense issue(贴近句子结构/动词形式)。解释:句子中“You will absolutely say yes”在回答过去情况时时态和语气不合,应使用表达推断/肯定的习惯用法“would”或直接现在时“I would absolutely say yes”或“I can say yes”;更重要的是“I used have a bike”是错误用法,正确结构为“used to + 动词原形”表示过去常有的习惯:"used to have"。改正建议:过去习惯使用“used to do”;表示肯定语气可用“would”或简化为“I definitely did.”
× When I received this gift I very like it and I always try by by my cycle my bike.
✓ When I received this gift I liked it very much and I always tried to ride my bike.
错误类型对应:8. Verb + -ing form 与 26. Sentence structure(动词形式和句子结构)。解释:"I very like it" 是错误的词序和副词用法,应为 "I liked it very much"(过去时+副词后置);"I always try by by my cycle my bike" 是无效短语,应该使用"try to ride my bike" 或 “used to ride my bike”。另外有重复单词和词汇选择错误(cycle/my bike)。改正建议:将动词改为过去式"liked",把副词"very much"放在动词后;表示尝试或经常做某事用"try to ride"或“always rode/used to ride”。
× Without a shadow of a doubt, I will absolutely say yes back is very convenient for everyone to use.
✓ Without a shadow of a doubt, I would absolutely say yes. Bikes are very convenient for everyone to use.
错误类型对应:26. Sentence structure 与 13. Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs(词序与词汇使用)。解释:原句“yes back is very convenient”缺少连接,且“back” 应为“bike”;“I will absolutely say yes”对现在普遍事实更自然用“would”或直接“Yes.” 改正建议:把“back”改为“bikes”,并拆成两句或用连接词;保证主语与谓语匹配:"Bikes are very convenient..."。
× In the past, there are a companion to develop a share back economy so we can see backs on the road.
✓ In the past, there was a campaign to develop a shared bike economy, so we could see bikes on the road.
错误类型对应:3. There be issue 与 1. Singular and plural issue(时态与单复数/词形问题)。解释:原句“In the past, there are”时态错误,应为过去时“there was”或“there were”;“a companion” 用词错误(应为“campaign”或“company”视语境),并且“share back”应为“shared bike”或“shared-bike”;最后“backs”应为“bikes”。改正建议:使用过去时“was/were”,将“companion”改为正确名词“campaign”,把“share back”改为“shared bike”,并把“backs”改为“bikes”。