Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce hesitations and grammar mistakes (e.g., tense consistency and article use). For example, say when exactly you got a bike, why you bought it, and how often you use it.

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. When I turned 18, I bought my first motorcycle and got a license so I could ride legally. Now I use it mainly for commuting to work or running errands about three times a week.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar (singular/plural agreement) and linking words (for example, because, also). Mention types of bikes and who uses them, and maybe say why they are popular (cost, convenience, environment).

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, people use sports bikes for exercise and commuting, while ordinary bikes are common among students and office workers. Also, bike-sharing programs have made cycling more accessible in many cities.

× Uh, no, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike uh, but when I turned 18 years old, uh, I bought a bike and I, I also get a license to ride it so I can ride on my own, uh, own now and, and I ride the bike in uh, when, when it is necessary to take.

✓ Uh, no, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike, but when I turned 18 years old, I bought a bike and I also got a license to ride it so I can ride on my own now, and I ride the bike when it is necessary.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. The actions of buying and obtaining a license happened in the past, so 'get' should be 'got' (past tense). Also redundant fillers and awkward phrasing were simplified. Suggestion: keep past actions in past tense (bought, got) and use present to describe current ability (I can ride, I ride). Use commas to separate clauses and remove repeated words for clarity.

× Yes I think bike is popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The noun 'bike' refers to the general category and should be plural ('bikes') when speaking generally. Also use 'are' to agree with the plural subject. Suggestion: use plural nouns with plural verbs when talking about general popularity.

× Umm like bikes umm bikes is usually uh have many types like sports or uh normal Normal which is used by both uni genders.

✓ Umm, bikes usually have many types, like sports or normal ones, which are used by both genders.

Multiple subject-verb and noun form errors: 'bikes' is plural so the verb should be 'have' (not 'is have'); 'normal Normal' is duplicated and should be 'normal ones'; 'uni genders' is incorrect—use 'both genders'. Also 'which are used' matches plural 'ones'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with plural subjects and use correct noun phrases ('normal ones', 'both genders') and avoid repetition.