Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I have.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
No, because. Our country don't have many back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 改进要点: 1) 时态和语法:回答应使用过去时(I did / I had),而不是现在时。 2) 结构与详尽性:先用一两词直接回答,然后用一到两句简短扩展说明(原因/细节),总句子不超过5句。 3) 流利度与自然表达:避免单字应答,补充具体信息使回答更自然(例如谁给的、什么时候、常去哪儿骑)。 改进示例(练习要点):在回答中使用过去时态、一个主题句加一到两个支持细节,并用连接词衔接。
Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle my parents bought for me on my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 改进要点: 1) 语法与拼写:修正主谓一致和拼写错误(don’t → don’t / doesn’t,back? → bike/track?),并避免中断句(不要用孤立的“because.”)。 2) 逻辑与完整性:用一到两句先给出直接观点,再用具体理由支持(例如基础设施、气候、交通习惯)。使用连接词(because, mainly because, however)使句子连贯。 3) 词汇与精确性:用更恰当的词汇描述原因(infrastructure, cycling lanes, public transport)而不是模糊词。
Example: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country, mainly because we lack safe cycling lanes and the roads are too busy. As a result, most people prefer cars or buses for daily travel.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
这是与考官过去时问句(Did you have...)不一致的时态问题。考官使用的是一般过去时,学生应使用过去时来回答肯定或否定。将一般现在时的“have”改为过去时“did”或简单过去的“Yes, I had.”(在此情境中更自然用“did”加动词原形或用“had”)。建议:当被问到关于过去的事情时,使用过去时(如:I did / I had)。
× No, because. Our country don't have many back.
✓ No, because our country doesn't have many bikes.
原句有两个问题:1) 标点和句子结构错误,“No, because.” 不完整。2) 主谓一致错误和拼写错误。主语“our country”是第三人称单数,助动词应为“doesn't”(不是“don't”);名词“back”应为“bike”。此外把两个片段合并成完整句子更自然。建议:使用完整的从句,确保主语为第三人称单数时动词用 doesn't,例如:"No, because our country doesn't have many bikes."