Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct tense and phrasing: use simple past for childhood, and remove fillers like “uh.”

Example: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used it every day to cycle to school, which took about fifteen minutes, and I enjoyed riding with my friends after classes.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to make reasons coherent. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms. Provide one or two specific reasons or examples.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many people choose bicycles because they are inexpensive and cheap to maintain; for example, students and low-income workers often commute by bike. Secondly, they are convenient for short trips in crowded cities.

× Well, uh, I have a bicycle when I was child and I was used to go to school at that time.

✓ Well, uh, I had a bicycle when I was a child and I used to go to school at that time.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms: 'have' should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a child' (past time). Missing article before 'child' — use 'a child'. 'I was used to go' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I used to go' to describe a habitual past action. Suggestion: use 'had' for past possession, include the article 'a', and use 'used to' + base verb for past habits.

× Well, in my country bikes are very important because a lot of people, they are used bikes to go anywhere because some people cannot afford cars to go anywhere so they can buy a bike easily. So the bike is most popular in my country.

✓ Well, in my country bikes are very important because a lot of people use bikes to go anywhere. Some people cannot afford cars, so they can buy a bike easily. So bikes are very popular in my country.

Multiple issues: unnecessary pronoun repetition 'people, they' — remove 'they'. 'are used bikes to go' is incorrect structure; use 'use bikes' (present tense) to describe a general fact. Repetition 'to go anywhere' can be simplified. 'So the bike is most popular' is awkward: use plural 'bikes are very popular' for general statement. Suggestions: use simple present 'use' for habitual/general facts, avoid redundant pronouns, keep number agreement between subject and verb and use plural when speaking generally.