Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak in complete, grammatically correct sentences and organize the information. Start with a clear topic sentence (work or student), then give concise supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (use present simple/continuous correctly).

Example: I am both a student and a part-time worker. I study in a business program at Anderson College, and I also work as a cashier at an old-age home, which helps me gain practical experience while I study.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer naming the institution, then add one or two specific details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid fragmented phrases and irrelevant words.

Example: I study at Cambrian College. It offers several diploma programs, and I chose the business diploma because it has practical courses and good industry connections.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific, well-linked reasons. Use plural/singular agreement and natural vocabulary (e.g., modern technology, smartboards, good furniture). Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Example: Yes, it's a good place to study because the campus has modern classrooms equipped with up-to-date technology such as smartboards. The furniture is comfortable, and the learning environment feels calm and encouraging.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly about changes you want now, not about childhood. State one specific change and explain why, using linking words for clarity. Avoid repeating phrases and use correct tense and word order.

Example: Yes, I would like the college to replace some of the older chairs. More ergonomic chairs would make long lectures more comfortable and help students concentrate better.

Suggestion: Give a clear plan with correct tense and structure. Start with a topic sentence about your intention, then add specifics (where, what subject, why, or when). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons.

Example: I plan to study abroad for my higher education. If I get the opportunity, I would like to pursue a master's degree in business overseas because it would expose me to international practices and improve my career prospects.

× 'I am work as a part time and full timers student.'

✓ 'I work part-time and am a full-time student.'

'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure errors: The original mixes 'I am work' (incorrect combination of be + verb) and uses incorrect noun forms. Use simple present 'I work' for employment and 'am a full-time student' for state. Hyphenate compound adjectives (part-time, full-time) and use singular 'student.' Suggestion: separate roles into two clauses and ensure correct verb forms.'

× 'I work as a cashier in the old age home and I studied.'

✓ 'I work as a cashier in an old-age home, and I study.'

'Subject-verb agreement and tense consistency: 'I studied' is past tense and conflicts with present 'I work.' Use present simple 'I study' to show ongoing study. Use article 'an' before 'old-age home' and hyphenate 'old-age.' Keep parallel structure for joined clauses.'

× 'I study. I'm studying in business program and has. Anderson College.'

✓ 'I'm studying in the Business program at Anderson College.'

'Sentence structure and verb form errors: The original is fragmented and contains 'has.' which is incorrect. Combine ideas into one clear sentence, use present continuous 'I'm studying' to indicate ongoing action, capitalize program name if it's a proper noun, and use preposition 'at' for institutions.'

× 'I study in the Cambrian college to study busy the college have lots of. Diploma.'

✓ 'I study at Cambrian College; the college is very busy and offers many diploma programs.'

'Incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure: Use 'at' for institutions (not 'in'), capitalize proper nouns, and revise fragmented phrase 'to study busy' into coherent clauses. 'Have lots of Diploma' should be 'offers many diploma programs.' Ensure subject-verb agreement 'the college is.'

× 'Yes, it is good place to study.'

✓ 'Yes, it is a good place to study.'

'Article error: Missing indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'place.' Add 'a' to form grammatically correct noun phrase.'

× 'There are lots of classrooms with the latest technology, having the smart glasses, good furnitures, comfortable chairs.'

✓ 'There are lots of classrooms with the latest technology, such as smart boards, good furniture, and comfortable chairs.'

'Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and pluralization: 'having the smart glasses' is awkward; 'smart boards' or another item fits better. 'Furnitures' is incorrect plural; 'furniture' is uncountable. Rewrite list with parallel structure and appropriate items.'

× 'In this way we feel the place is good.'

✓ 'Because of these features, we feel the place is good.'

'Sentence structure: 'In this way' is vague. Use 'Because of these features' to link cause and effect clearly, and maintain natural word order.'

× 'Yes, I would like to change this in my study place, when I when I was studied at the childhood age, that school or that school was not having a good equipped chair.'

✓ 'Yes, I would like to change something about my study place. When I was a child, my school did not have well-equipped chairs.'

'Sentence structure and tense issues: The original repeats phrases and mixes tenses and forms ('was studied at the childhood age', 'was not having'). Correctly use past simple 'I was a child' and 'did not have' for past possession. Use 'well-equipped chairs' instead of 'good equipped chair.' Split into two clearer sentences.'

× 'My future study plans is going to abroad whenever I got a chance then I go then then definite.'

✓ 'My future study plans are to go abroad whenever I get a chance.'

'Present tense and subject-verb agreement: 'plans' is plural so use 'are' not 'is.' Use infinitive 'to go abroad' for intention. Use present simple 'I get' for conditional time clauses and remove redundant words.'

× 'Definitely I would go to the abroad for higher studies which feels me good.'

✓ 'I will definitely go abroad for higher studies because it feels right for me.'

'Future tense and article error: Do not use 'the' before 'abroad.' Use 'will' for future intention and reorder phrase 'feels me good' to natural 'feels right for me.' Ensure adverb placement 'definitely' is next to auxiliary or subject.'